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Post by Alohilani on Jul 3, 2007 13:14:35 GMT -5
Updated. ;
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Post by BandGeek727 on Jul 3, 2007 17:32:47 GMT -5
Wow. Just... wow.
I love the way you write for those two. It's so sweet. Aw, XR and that kid were so cute! And now I hate 42 even more...
Great chapter, Kila. SO great.
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Post by Alohilani on Jul 3, 2007 17:41:44 GMT -5
Thank yoooou. <3 That's what I'm here for
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Post by BandGeek727 on Jul 3, 2007 17:44:16 GMT -5
You're welcome! That's what I'm here for *lol* There's a lot more where that came from, isn't there?
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Post by Alohilani on Jul 3, 2007 17:46:09 GMT -5
...yeah. ;
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Post by BandGeek727 on Jul 3, 2007 17:48:34 GMT -5
*lol!*
Anyway...
I really felt bad for XR. None of that was fair for him, was it? Ooh, forgot to say I liked how you wrote it from both of their pov's. Made it intriguing. ^_^
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Post by Alohilani on Jul 3, 2007 17:55:40 GMT -5
Thank you. <3
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Post by Alohilani on Jul 14, 2007 22:20:34 GMT -5
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Post by BandGeek727 on Jul 17, 2007 10:50:06 GMT -5
Carrie... sneaky, Kila, sneaky. ;D I also like the idea that XR likes things that aren't electronic. Must get monotonous, after a while. Lol, sounds like how I fell about my own writing. I love it in my head, and as soon as I put it down, I'm thinking what IS this?Poor XR. I like it.
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Post by aerinsol on Jul 17, 2007 14:22:57 GMT -5
oh I feel like that too... an excellent piece Kila... just absolutely mind boggling, i was stunned when I finished reading it... it was so deep... oh, poor Booster... why'd you gotta be like that XR? 8O man, how can such a funny lit bot be so movingly emo? XO It's a surprise that XR was writing by hand, but when I thought about it, it felt like it's something that I'd knew he'd do... kila... are you psychic? all in all a very good piece, kila... more more!
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Post by Alohilani on Jul 17, 2007 18:58:52 GMT -5
YES I AM PSYCHO WAIT NEVERMIND thank you. XP
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Post by Alohilani on Nov 6, 2007 9:13:19 GMT -5
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Post by Alohilani on Nov 9, 2007 11:46:24 GMT -5
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Post by BandGeek727 on Nov 9, 2007 12:59:40 GMT -5
Ah, well... personally I don't go in for crossovers much.
But I like your wording in this one; very nice.
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Post by Alohilani on Nov 9, 2007 17:16:51 GMT -5
Okay. Well, thanks.
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