I Palindrome I

[levy120]

I will squish the last 3 chapters on 14 pages and then take it along with me to work, it might take a little time anyway, since it's quite much to catch up - besides already reading into the reworks, I'm not done completely yet.
Papercosts - Yeah! It's time I'm finally getting some MONEY for what I do over there... xx"

It actually would have been kind of nice to somehow... mark the new important edits, since it's kind of hard to see where to pay extra-attention, but it's probably wanted this way for newcomers.
- - -
*e: Not that I would need that with my "fantastical" brain (Dane Cook FTW)
I caught the new sub-plot, yes and the new OC appearance. At least I don't remember XL's friend to have a name in the old version.
I also do believe that the vines were new, but I have to say that I'm not so sure with THAT one, since they didn't really come into plot-importance before the last chapter. It could be that you slightly mentioned them before and I simply skipped it due to an "information overload". I probably should have taken some notes, but I just plainly forgot to... I was too busy marking where I was with the reading, for it was alle kinda small and squished and stuff... xD

- - -
Otherwise, any plans on the new "regular update" date? I don't think it would be too good to realease updates of two different fanfics on one day.

[Alohilani]

I'm not having a regular update anymore... I'll just be uploading new chapters as they're edited (though the last chapter of the collab was actually just posted so I wouldn't really have a conflict problem after today).

And yes, the vines were new- they weren't originally even in the story, which was a mistake because in later volumes [cut for blabbing]

[BandGeek727]

I love what you added - especially about the scales, that was awesome.

[Alohilani]

Oh, thank you!

Zim will end up being a reeeeeeally important character so I figured his activities in the Galactic Alliance needed to inspire a more dramatic reaction. Foreshadowing of a sort.

[Alohilani]

Two o' dems!

www.fanfiction.net/s/4512810/7/
www.fanfiction.net/s/4512810/8/

[Robbie Valiant, P.I.]

Analysis of Kila Jookiba- Part Jumba, Part Poison Ivy, Part Alf, all AWESOME. Alf's in there because he's the closest personality analogue I could find. Really, she's somewhere between Alf and Shego, but that's just 1 too many parts. But on a serious note, really loving this story, and BS as a whole. Particularly your OC's. They're a refreshing break from all the Mary Sues I seem to be adept at finding... <<

[Alohilani]

Ahh, thank you! <3333 There's a new chapter: www.fanfiction.net/s/4512810/9/

[Alohilani]

www.fanfiction.net/s/4512810/10/

www.fanfiction.net/s/4512810/11/

[Robbie Valiant, P.I.]

Nice, a good ending. Though I must ask... Does that mention of "Forrester" mean MST3K is involved? That possibly at some point we'll see the SOL, or Joel/Mike and the Bots?

[Alohilani]

...no. sorry :<