Post by Skyfire on Dec 14, 2009 8:01:01 GMT -5
This is meant mostly for EEZ and Steel, although Ckret and Saron should probably read it, too, since they read the part of the discussion thread this pertains to. Nothing said here is at all meant to be derogatory.
Okay, you’re probably wondering why exactly I’m continuing this. Well, because now that I understand EEZ’s position maybe a little bit better, I think she and Steel need to understand mine. …Please? That’s fair, right? Yeah, and not only that, but I have some apologies to make. Finally, because I want to ensure that nothing like this will ever happen again. We made mistakes and we need to learn from them, but just locking up the thread won’t exactly help that process. It’s kind of like treating the symptoms and ignoring the disease, or even sort of like running away. I don’t know about anybody else, but I really don’t want anything like this to happen again.
Better settle in or copy all this to MS Word or something – this will take you probably about half an hour to read. Well, depending on how fast you read, of course – but by the time I’m done, I’ll probably have typed out about 10,000 words, and that’s not including all the quotes. O.o Yuuup, that’s about right.
So I’m gonna start this off with an apology, but the main one will come closer to the end:
I’m sorry if I sounded malicious, condescending, mocking, insulting… I did not mean to sound that way. At all. Rude… um, I wasn’t exactly aiming for that, but I guess I can see that in my post, yeah.
I’m sorry, guys. …To everybody, not just EEZ.
All right, I’m going to make an attempt to answer… well, not everything everybody said, but a lot of it. Starting with Mandalore Thrawn’s involvement. Oh, and Steel, I’ll get to your points in the second half of this post.
Okay, before I get started with Thrawn, let me say this much, and it’s something that maybe nobody’s thought of yet: I’ve never said anything like that one post until now. That… doesn’t strike anybody as significant? It should. I mean, just think: in previous posts, I’d been strong on my points, sure, but never said anything like that one post. So why did I do that one post just then? If I’m really as mean as I guess you guys think I am (or thought I was, whatever you want), then why hadn’t you seen more of that throughout my other posts? I was totally clean up until then – the worst anyone could possibly accuse me of was getting angsty, even with some criticism. Did you guys ever really think about the why? …Just… think about it for a bit, okay, please? and I’ll come back to that later.
MANDALORE THRAWN
Yes, he’s my brother.
…Not really, EEZ. You see, though I’m Thrawn’s elder by three years, we’re more like twins. We confide in each other, and share almost everything with each other. We bounce around story ideas all the time – usually in the kitchen when he’s washing dishes and I’m drying. And what affects one of us invariably affects the other. He’s followed this part of the thread since I first introduced the cyborg anatomy, he’s listened to me pour out whatever reactions I’ve had – he has every right to say something about it, even to get in-between the two of us. He’s the one who actually lives with me and has to deal with me, y’know. ^^
Thrawn never said anything that could be misconstrued as an attack. He repeatedly said to drop the issue, but that was it.
Well, I didn’t think it was brotherly duty, and he definitely wasn’t “dragged” into this. He read the posts and he had some things to say about it – if he had been a member and seen this happening to someone else, he probably would have done the same thing. …Although I did later find out that his brotherly defensive programming was kicking in.
He just wanted it to stop.
HATE AND MALICE
Steel, I don’t hate you, and I was pretty sure that EEZ wasn’t meaning to be mean or anything. But. Some of the stuff she’s said could be taken that way – yes, even skirted along the lines of what could almost be termed “derogatory” – and I’ll come back to that point later.
But let me reiterate that I never meant to be malicious. And EEZ doesn’t deserve it! You’d have to be a pretty rotten person for me to be “malicious.” Bring somebody rotten on the board, and you’ll see just how nasty I can get, muwahahaha… Why are you all looking at me like that? *cringes* I’m just trying to lighten the mood a little – it needs it!
At any rate, no, I don’t hate or even dislike or resent anybody… do I even hate anybody? Umm, I can think of some categories, but no specific people… My point is, I don’t hate like that. My hate would be reserved for people who really deserve it – you know, criminal kind of people. That might sound… I don’t know, wishy-washy? but it’s true.
EVOLUTION (and religion, too, I guess)
Oh, EEZ, it was a stupid joke. That’s why I used archaic phraseology – so that you would know that I was being silly. I didn’t think it was a big deal – had someone did that to me, I would have retaliated with a sort of blustering silliness along the lines of “How darest thou attack me, knave? xD” I did feel it necessary to drop the evolution since you were talking about it in correlation to my Christian, creationist works – the point was moot since evolution doesn’t have anything to do with my stuff. And I kept trying afterward to get you to drop it (evolution), but I guess you weren’t getting the message.
And I did apologize for doing it (the slap):
“Okay, okay, so I could resist.(And it wasn’t a beating – it was just a mild slap-slap that couldn’t have possibly actually hurt…) I did mean it in good fun, you know, but… It was wrong of me, and I’m sorry. Would you please forgive me?”
…I did ask for your forgiveness, EEZ. Weeks ago. But you never even acknowledged my apology, let alone said that you forgave me. I didn’t just say it – I meant it. I still mean it.
It was actually the one time that I did skip what she said, and I forgot to explain that. I left the evolution/creation stuff out to save it for a new thread – I just forgot to say that. I’m sorry.
I don’t “drag” religion into my fanworks: my faith – because true Christianity is a relationship, not a religion – is a natural part of my work because it is a natural part of me. If that narrows down my audience… well… okay. I already know that I won’t lose the readers who truly love the story, and that the four I know who still stick with love it all the more because there’s faith in it. That is so very special to me – it means more to me than having a big audience. Does that mean that I get preachy? Well, I guess that depends on how sensitive you are to Christian work. I go into a little bit of Bible expository, I guess you might say, every now and then when a character actually reads the Bible. But on the whole, you’d be basically just reading about people who are Christians, and it’s evident in their day-to-day lives. Now, there are some Biblical themes that come out of the woodwork, like trust (in God) and redemption. But those are probably some of the best parts, and some of the most pivotal moments, because that’s when characters make crucial decisions about their lives.
Besides all that, it can be logically argued that evolution itself is a religion, because it is just as much a belief system as anything else. Evolutionist and Creationists look at the exact same evidence and end up with different answers because of their beliefs. Evolutions look for billions of years, and that is exactly what they find; Creationists look for 6,000 years and that is exactly what they find. You will always find what you are looking for. Or, as Aslan in Narnia says, “All get what they truly desire.” Of course, we know that somebody has to be wrong – Evolutionists or Creationists. One or the other has to be misconstruing the evidence. As time goes on, and more evidence is uncovered, it will be interesting to see how the war progresses. Oh, and let me say really quickly that neither Evolution nor Creation can be scientifically proven, because… That’s right! You need to have an observer to observe and record! That’s part of the scientific method!
At any rate, do you mean religion period, or do you mean “real-world religion”? Because there’s still evidence of religion in BLoSC (oddly enough, it’s always tied to XR, lol):
----“The Torque Armada”: XR prays. Now, for the sake of the argument, it really doesn’t matter who he’s praying to – it could be a single Creator, a plethora of deities, or even the Force! But he’s praying.
----“The Return of XL”: “…real friendly. I think he’s a church deacon.” Now, whether you see that as evidence of it being our galaxy or just as the writers trying to make us comfortable with what we know, the fact remains that “church” and “deacon” are still an intrinsic part of religion.
----“The Lightyear Factor”: Commander Nebula says that, wherever Buzz is (thinking that Buzz is dead), he hopes it’s a happier place. That’s referring to some kind of afterlife, which is inherently a religious concept. Plus, XR pulls out bagpipes and plays a song, and – you may not believe this – but it’s actually “Amazing Grace.” …Hey, that song’s been my favorite hymn since I was three – I know it when I hear it, y’know? ;D
----“Devolutionaries”: The Binipinardian monks! xDDD I love those guys.
Anyway, there’ll always be religion, no matter whether we’re talking about the future or another galaxy. It’s an inevitable part of life. *shrugs*
…Okay, so I went into this whole long spiel about evolution and religion that you could probably care less about, but there were some points that I thought needed making, so~
STEEL’S POINTS
((My brother had a post to answer yours, but he couldn’t post it up before the thread was locked. I think you would have been satisfied with his answers, though. ))
Well, I’ve already said it, but I never meant to be spiteful or insulting. And as far as “taking this far too personally” is concerned – well, I’m addressing that in my next post, but… Was I taking it a bit too personally? Maybe. Far too much? I don’t think so.
But I’ll tell you what. I was feeling far too often that things were falling down around my head. It felt like more and more work was being loaded onto me as I tried to figure this and that out to make my stuff work or to show you guys how it did work, and I’ve already had a lot to deal with in real life, because on top of the usual, there’s been more kitchen work for different reasons and online college and working on getting my book out on the market. I was feeling stressed, inadequate, and inferior, because no matter what help I accepted, what things I said I’d work on or study or think about, what arguments I made that I was pretty doggone sure were valid – it was never good enough. I felt that I was being picked apart and criticized within an inch of my life – does that sound right to you?
As Elizabeth Lane says in the old classic “Christmas in Connecticut”: “I’m tired of being pushed around, tired of being told what to do, tired of dancing to somebody else’s tune! In short – [casual now, shrugs] I’m tired.” …That’s one of the best scenes in the movie, lol.
Criticism is merely pointing out a problem, which is what you both did. Now, in quite a few cases, I saw validity to what you both were saying, decided to work on those areas, and told you guys that I would. But never once did I get any suggestions on how I could improve, which is what true constructive criticism is. And I know, because I’ve been working with constructive criticism for the past few years, coming from my cousin, whose sharpness and ideas largely helped bring my original fantasy novel to what it is today. I’m no stranger to criticism, or constructive criticism. I know what constructive criticism like. And I know that is not what I was getting. I needed help and encouragement, not arguments that this-and-this couldn’t possibly work.
I’ll reiterate that no mocking was ever intended. EVER. …And I can’t help but feel just a bit hurt that you guys think that I would do that. I’ve never done that to anybody! …Well, nobody real… fictional characters, you know… ahem, moving on.
And I felt condescended to – extremely so, sometimes – by EEZ. In fact, quite a few times, she’s made me feel like a ten-year-old. At least in her last post, she came right out and said that I was being immature this time – of course, I beg to differ, but at least I got a totally open and honest opinion. It’s easier to deal with honesty than politeness – with politeness, you can’t always be sure what a person means or thinks. Even if a person is being rude as well as honest, you still know exactly where he or she stands. Between the two, I guess I vastly prefer honesty, no matter how bad it might sound.
Even so, I didn’t mean at all to sound condescending – I can think of only one point at which I could have sounded like that, but that was sooo not what I was aiming for. I was just trying to get my point across as firmly as possible.
I know she wasn’t. And I really don’t understand her humor, I guess. In fact, I’ve never had so much interaction with someone I haven’t really been able to understand all that much. I mean, I can pretty well predict what she’s gonna say, how she’s gonna react, what she’s gonna think about this or that, but that doesn’t necessitate that I understand it. In fact, I’ve never had so much interaction with someone who’s so completely different from me – which, really, I think, is where a lot of the problem is. And more on that later.
I don’t doubt her good intentions, but everyone knows that sometimes, good intentions aren’t enough. And it didn’t often feel that she was really trying all that much to understand what I was saying – sometimes, maybe, but not much. If I’m misreading that, then that only underscores what I just said: I don’t understand her all that much.
I presented my ideas merely to show you guys what I wanted to do – I was really excited about it all. I actually laid my ideas out to kind of showcase them – not really to have them dissected (although I probably should have known that that’s what was going to happen). And Thrawn’s right: “Yes, that is the point, but it is laid to be picked apart and reassembled, not torn apart and scattered to the four winds.”
You replied that, “It was scattered to the four winds because neither side was willing to back down.” Now, it’s true that neither EEZ nor I were willing to back down – that’s readily apparent. But it was scattered to the four winds because nobody was helping me to actually work on it and improve it. Pointing out problems is almost useless if you don’t have a way to help the person fix those problems. I was not getting that kind of help when I needed it. Had I gotten that, I can assure you this whole mess would never have happened in the first place.
I welcome an examination to make sure that my foundation will hold. I don’t welcome a demolition crew coming in and trying to clear it away for a different foundation, because I know that mine isn’t that bad. Maybe it didn’t seem like a demolition crew to you guys and that wasn’t what you meant, but… it’s about my story, anyway, so maybe you could try to look at it from my angle?
I still don’t think I really passed my limits in my reaction to what I thought was being said. Now, if I misunderstood what was being said, then I’m not sure that my reaction even counts anymore, because it was based upon something that apparently wasn’t strictly real. And at any rate, I wasn’t aiming for any of that negative stuff (malice and so on) – I was aiming for strict honesty. If we can’t handle people who just shoot totally from their heads – yes, even if that includes what we might think is meanness – then we’ve got problems.
The only “obvious” that I’m seeing here is (a) you’re a loyal friend, and (b) you misread most (if not all) of what I said. So, with all due respect, I don’t really see any “obvious” here the way you’re seeing it – with all the misunderstanding floating around, “obvious” has suddenly gone into the realm of subjectivity.
I never treated EEZ like garbage, although I can think of one or two lines here and there that might make you think that I did. I don’t treat people like garbage. You know, you and EEZ have made some very sweeping judgments about what I said in just one post. That’s a pretty shaky reason to suddenly drop all respect for and friendship with the person who posted, no matter how bad she sounded. Because it was a onetime thing – you’ve never heard her talk like that before, and you have no idea what was going on her life or in her mind at the time.
So… does this really mean that you no longer think of me as a friend? Because… believe it or not, I still think of you and EEZ as my friends, and I still respect you two as much as ever. …You don’t have to say anything about it just yet – just please think about it, okay? …Don’t I sound more like the Sky you know and love (or loved, if you prefer)? Yes, that other post-in-question is still Sky, too, but that was a different side of her that doesn’t surface very often at all, and almost never online.
And I really hope that doesn’t make you lose respect or like for my works, or that you decide not to check out my stuff in the future. You know, the best part of a person can come out in his art. You already know that I’m a good artist, a good writer, and a fair MV-maker. Please don’t let my works suffer for my rash post – please continue to enjoy them! …Once my connection is good again, I actually have a couple new videos to upload! One is a Buzz & Warp vid, kinda for KJ; one is another BLoSC gen Mulan style; the newest is a Buzz & Zurg vid, a “sequel” – if you will – to Steel’s “Playing with the Big Boys.” Can you guess what it is? You guys should love it!
I do. Multiple quotes have never confused me before, and I appreciate that kind point-to-point-ness so that I can see exactly what people think about this and that, and I have closure. Otherwise, how am I to know? I know it can take a long time, and you’ve seen yourselves that sometimes, it takes me days to answer posts because mine are so long, but I want to cover all the bases. I wouldn’t mind having to wait for a reply that’s a bit in coming if it means that all my points receive replies.
…I’m sorry that your thread got messed up, Steel – I really am! =(
Hey, I have an open mind – I just don’t like to leave it open enough to let my brains fall out. …That was a joke, and it was a variation of something Saron actually said once in an email. You know, her cute little puns? I thought it was funny. …So yeah, I’m stubborn, and I’m not ashamed of it. I’d rather be stubborn than not be stubborn, if that makes any sense.
I enjoy reading all kinds of theories, too – opinions are a little different, but sometimes, yeah. But I (understandably) don’t appreciate it when those theories/opinions/whatever are trying to tear down what I’ve worked so hard on.
And it takes all kinds of people to make a world – or so I hear. Actually, I never liked that saying, but I guess it’s true. So, Steel, ya just hafta put up with us bullheads! ;D …That was humor, too, just to make sure that everybody understands that.
And yeah, I guess it did go too far. But that was everybody’s fault, not just mine.
I skip over the part about my brother here, because I already addressed it above.
I guess we are – both wrong and misreading, I mean. *mopes* Gee, how can a couple of people who have so much interaction with each other get it so wrong?
Posts like that one of Ckret’s are great, but all that formatting takes even more time, y’know? But how was I really supposed to point out specifics? I was already quoting EEZ paragraph by paragraph – sometimes even line by line. *shrugs helplessly*
And I don’t find quote-filled posts confusing or tiring – and since the posts were being addressed specifically to me, shouldn’t that count for something?
At any rate, there’s a perfect case-in-point where I said something on a topic, and EEZ replied on the same topic without seeming to have read anything that I said about it, and I’ll get to that later.
And in closing on this point, there were several times in which I added to certain topics, and EEZ continued those topic, but only with what she was saying, and never acknowledging that I had said anything new on the matter at all. I can pull up every single instance and show you (and I probably will in the next post).
D’aww, Steel, school comes first – you didn’t have to! Although I do sincerely appreciate it. But let me point out that I never have the time to answer every single point – quickly. That’s why it takes me days sometimes to reply – because I don’t have enough time in one day. Trust me, my schedule’s as busy as anyone else’s, just in a different way, and it’s a bit more flexible, but that’s it.
Well, I’ve read quite a bit of British stuff (Tolkien, C. S. Lewis, even some of G. A. Henty), and in 12th grade, my literature study was British… And there are movies like Pride and Prejudice and My Fair Lady, etc… so I know what British humor is like. You really think that EEZ’s humor is like that? Honestly, I’ve never encountered her kind of humor anywhere else. *is baffled* I mean, I’ve laughed before at stuff that she’s said that was obviously funny, but if it’s subtle, then I guess I’m lost. =(
True on that last part, but may I point out, in my defense, that I have bended? I can pull up quotes if you’d like, not only from the Zurg thread but from others, as well.
I’ll address this in my next post. But I never mocked, cross my heart. And I was being defensive, true, but not overly so. So… yeah, I’ll get back to that later. And I’ve already talked about the condescending part, so I won’t repeat myself.
Okay, you’re probably wondering why exactly I’m continuing this. Well, because now that I understand EEZ’s position maybe a little bit better, I think she and Steel need to understand mine. …Please? That’s fair, right? Yeah, and not only that, but I have some apologies to make. Finally, because I want to ensure that nothing like this will ever happen again. We made mistakes and we need to learn from them, but just locking up the thread won’t exactly help that process. It’s kind of like treating the symptoms and ignoring the disease, or even sort of like running away. I don’t know about anybody else, but I really don’t want anything like this to happen again.
Better settle in or copy all this to MS Word or something – this will take you probably about half an hour to read. Well, depending on how fast you read, of course – but by the time I’m done, I’ll probably have typed out about 10,000 words, and that’s not including all the quotes. O.o Yuuup, that’s about right.
So I’m gonna start this off with an apology, but the main one will come closer to the end:
I’m sorry if I sounded malicious, condescending, mocking, insulting… I did not mean to sound that way. At all. Rude… um, I wasn’t exactly aiming for that, but I guess I can see that in my post, yeah.
I’m sorry, guys. …To everybody, not just EEZ.
All right, I’m going to make an attempt to answer… well, not everything everybody said, but a lot of it. Starting with Mandalore Thrawn’s involvement. Oh, and Steel, I’ll get to your points in the second half of this post.
Okay, before I get started with Thrawn, let me say this much, and it’s something that maybe nobody’s thought of yet: I’ve never said anything like that one post until now. That… doesn’t strike anybody as significant? It should. I mean, just think: in previous posts, I’d been strong on my points, sure, but never said anything like that one post. So why did I do that one post just then? If I’m really as mean as I guess you guys think I am (or thought I was, whatever you want), then why hadn’t you seen more of that throughout my other posts? I was totally clean up until then – the worst anyone could possibly accuse me of was getting angsty, even with some criticism. Did you guys ever really think about the why? …Just… think about it for a bit, okay, please? and I’ll come back to that later.
MANDALORE THRAWN
Yes, he’s my brother.
This is just between Skyfire and myself; this is OUR interaction.
…Not really, EEZ. You see, though I’m Thrawn’s elder by three years, we’re more like twins. We confide in each other, and share almost everything with each other. We bounce around story ideas all the time – usually in the kitchen when he’s washing dishes and I’m drying. And what affects one of us invariably affects the other. He’s followed this part of the thread since I first introduced the cyborg anatomy, he’s listened to me pour out whatever reactions I’ve had – he has every right to say something about it, even to get in-between the two of us. He’s the one who actually lives with me and has to deal with me, y’know. ^^
That's just their opinions; don't attack them.
Thrawn never said anything that could be misconstrued as an attack. He repeatedly said to drop the issue, but that was it.
I just wonder why it was that you had to be dragged into all this.
And yet, if you did this on your own, feeling that it was some sort of brotherly duty on your part, I don't think I can argue with that; I would do the same for my sister, actually.
And yet, if you did this on your own, feeling that it was some sort of brotherly duty on your part, I don't think I can argue with that; I would do the same for my sister, actually.
Well, I didn’t think it was brotherly duty, and he definitely wasn’t “dragged” into this. He read the posts and he had some things to say about it – if he had been a member and seen this happening to someone else, he probably would have done the same thing. …Although I did later find out that his brotherly defensive programming was kicking in.
He just wanted it to stop.
HATE AND MALICE
Steel, I don’t hate you, and I was pretty sure that EEZ wasn’t meaning to be mean or anything. But. Some of the stuff she’s said could be taken that way – yes, even skirted along the lines of what could almost be termed “derogatory” – and I’ll come back to that point later.
But let me reiterate that I never meant to be malicious. And EEZ doesn’t deserve it! You’d have to be a pretty rotten person for me to be “malicious.” Bring somebody rotten on the board, and you’ll see just how nasty I can get, muwahahaha… Why are you all looking at me like that? *cringes* I’m just trying to lighten the mood a little – it needs it!
At any rate, no, I don’t hate or even dislike or resent anybody… do I even hate anybody? Umm, I can think of some categories, but no specific people… My point is, I don’t hate like that. My hate would be reserved for people who really deserve it – you know, criminal kind of people. That might sound… I don’t know, wishy-washy? but it’s true.
EVOLUTION (and religion, too, I guess)
Third, the only reason WHY evolution was brought up was because Skyfire had taken the liberty to slap my virtual tongue--to which is a great insult as she not only felt it was necessary to hit me, but to also silence me and my views. If she had not slapped me, it would have NEVER been brought up ever again.
Oh, EEZ, it was a stupid joke. That’s why I used archaic phraseology – so that you would know that I was being silly. I didn’t think it was a big deal – had someone did that to me, I would have retaliated with a sort of blustering silliness along the lines of “How darest thou attack me, knave? xD” I did feel it necessary to drop the evolution since you were talking about it in correlation to my Christian, creationist works – the point was moot since evolution doesn’t have anything to do with my stuff. And I kept trying afterward to get you to drop it (evolution), but I guess you weren’t getting the message.
And I did apologize for doing it (the slap):
“Okay, okay, so I could resist.
…I did ask for your forgiveness, EEZ. Weeks ago. But you never even acknowledged my apology, let alone said that you forgave me. I didn’t just say it – I meant it. I still mean it.
I have no real say on the evolution/creation issue. I don't think I even mentioned them in my posts at all besides the bread/nutella parallel (and actual bread is quite tasty, but I was talking about sliced bread which is rather dry and needs flavouring). I do believe in evolution, but everyone's entitled to their own beliefs. I just don't think that religion should be dragged into BLoSC, but evolution can simply by taking into account the episode "Devolutionaries"--and this is actually an example of Skyfire skipping something EEZ said. But this doesn't mean that you need to talk about evolution--I just think that it should be taken into account simply because of this fact.
It was actually the one time that I did skip what she said, and I forgot to explain that. I left the evolution/creation stuff out to save it for a new thread – I just forgot to say that. I’m sorry.
I don’t “drag” religion into my fanworks: my faith – because true Christianity is a relationship, not a religion – is a natural part of my work because it is a natural part of me. If that narrows down my audience… well… okay. I already know that I won’t lose the readers who truly love the story, and that the four I know who still stick with love it all the more because there’s faith in it. That is so very special to me – it means more to me than having a big audience. Does that mean that I get preachy? Well, I guess that depends on how sensitive you are to Christian work. I go into a little bit of Bible expository, I guess you might say, every now and then when a character actually reads the Bible. But on the whole, you’d be basically just reading about people who are Christians, and it’s evident in their day-to-day lives. Now, there are some Biblical themes that come out of the woodwork, like trust (in God) and redemption. But those are probably some of the best parts, and some of the most pivotal moments, because that’s when characters make crucial decisions about their lives.
Besides all that, it can be logically argued that evolution itself is a religion, because it is just as much a belief system as anything else. Evolutionist and Creationists look at the exact same evidence and end up with different answers because of their beliefs. Evolutions look for billions of years, and that is exactly what they find; Creationists look for 6,000 years and that is exactly what they find. You will always find what you are looking for. Or, as Aslan in Narnia says, “All get what they truly desire.” Of course, we know that somebody has to be wrong – Evolutionists or Creationists. One or the other has to be misconstruing the evidence. As time goes on, and more evidence is uncovered, it will be interesting to see how the war progresses. Oh, and let me say really quickly that neither Evolution nor Creation can be scientifically proven, because… That’s right! You need to have an observer to observe and record! That’s part of the scientific method!
At any rate, do you mean religion period, or do you mean “real-world religion”? Because there’s still evidence of religion in BLoSC (oddly enough, it’s always tied to XR, lol):
----“The Torque Armada”: XR prays. Now, for the sake of the argument, it really doesn’t matter who he’s praying to – it could be a single Creator, a plethora of deities, or even the Force! But he’s praying.
----“The Return of XL”: “…real friendly. I think he’s a church deacon.” Now, whether you see that as evidence of it being our galaxy or just as the writers trying to make us comfortable with what we know, the fact remains that “church” and “deacon” are still an intrinsic part of religion.
----“The Lightyear Factor”: Commander Nebula says that, wherever Buzz is (thinking that Buzz is dead), he hopes it’s a happier place. That’s referring to some kind of afterlife, which is inherently a religious concept. Plus, XR pulls out bagpipes and plays a song, and – you may not believe this – but it’s actually “Amazing Grace.” …Hey, that song’s been my favorite hymn since I was three – I know it when I hear it, y’know? ;D
----“Devolutionaries”: The Binipinardian monks! xDDD I love those guys.
Anyway, there’ll always be religion, no matter whether we’re talking about the future or another galaxy. It’s an inevitable part of life. *shrugs*
…Okay, so I went into this whole long spiel about evolution and religion that you could probably care less about, but there were some points that I thought needed making, so~
STEEL’S POINTS
((My brother had a post to answer yours, but he couldn’t post it up before the thread was locked. I think you would have been satisfied with his answers, though. ))
I think you are taking this far to personally and are being intentionally spiteful and rude, even downright insulting.
Well, I’ve already said it, but I never meant to be spiteful or insulting. And as far as “taking this far too personally” is concerned – well, I’m addressing that in my next post, but… Was I taking it a bit too personally? Maybe. Far too much? I don’t think so.
But I’ll tell you what. I was feeling far too often that things were falling down around my head. It felt like more and more work was being loaded onto me as I tried to figure this and that out to make my stuff work or to show you guys how it did work, and I’ve already had a lot to deal with in real life, because on top of the usual, there’s been more kitchen work for different reasons and online college and working on getting my book out on the market. I was feeling stressed, inadequate, and inferior, because no matter what help I accepted, what things I said I’d work on or study or think about, what arguments I made that I was pretty doggone sure were valid – it was never good enough. I felt that I was being picked apart and criticized within an inch of my life – does that sound right to you?
As Elizabeth Lane says in the old classic “Christmas in Connecticut”: “I’m tired of being pushed around, tired of being told what to do, tired of dancing to somebody else’s tune! In short – [casual now, shrugs] I’m tired.” …That’s one of the best scenes in the movie, lol.
EEZ is merely giving you constructive criticism
Criticism is merely pointing out a problem, which is what you both did. Now, in quite a few cases, I saw validity to what you both were saying, decided to work on those areas, and told you guys that I would. But never once did I get any suggestions on how I could improve, which is what true constructive criticism is. And I know, because I’ve been working with constructive criticism for the past few years, coming from my cousin, whose sharpness and ideas largely helped bring my original fantasy novel to what it is today. I’m no stranger to criticism, or constructive criticism. I know what constructive criticism like. And I know that is not what I was getting. I needed help and encouragement, not arguments that this-and-this couldn’t possibly work.
and you on the other half are being very condescending to her in return, not to mention mocking.
I’ll reiterate that no mocking was ever intended. EVER. …And I can’t help but feel just a bit hurt that you guys think that I would do that. I’ve never done that to anybody! …Well, nobody real… fictional characters, you know… ahem, moving on.
And I felt condescended to – extremely so, sometimes – by EEZ. In fact, quite a few times, she’s made me feel like a ten-year-old. At least in her last post, she came right out and said that I was being immature this time – of course, I beg to differ, but at least I got a totally open and honest opinion. It’s easier to deal with honesty than politeness – with politeness, you can’t always be sure what a person means or thinks. Even if a person is being rude as well as honest, you still know exactly where he or she stands. Between the two, I guess I vastly prefer honesty, no matter how bad it might sound.
Even so, I didn’t mean at all to sound condescending – I can think of only one point at which I could have sounded like that, but that was sooo not what I was aiming for. I was just trying to get my point across as firmly as possible.
Maybe you can't understand her humour, but she was never being rude or spiteful to you in her posts.
I know she wasn’t. And I really don’t understand her humor, I guess. In fact, I’ve never had so much interaction with someone I haven’t really been able to understand all that much. I mean, I can pretty well predict what she’s gonna say, how she’s gonna react, what she’s gonna think about this or that, but that doesn’t necessitate that I understand it. In fact, I’ve never had so much interaction with someone who’s so completely different from me – which, really, I think, is where a lot of the problem is. And more on that later.
She was just trying to be helpful and point out a few things. She wanted to understand your reasoning behind your ideas, and if there is good reasoning to back your ideas up then I don't see why they can't work out. And ckret in turn pointed out some things that EEZ hadn't seen.
I don’t doubt her good intentions, but everyone knows that sometimes, good intentions aren’t enough. And it didn’t often feel that she was really trying all that much to understand what I was saying – sometimes, maybe, but not much. If I’m misreading that, then that only underscores what I just said: I don’t understand her all that much.
But isn't this the point of laying out your ideas on the table? Having them examined and picked apart to ensure their plausibility? I thought this was what this was all about, and I didn't detect any real animosity in this thread until your posts.
I presented my ideas merely to show you guys what I wanted to do – I was really excited about it all. I actually laid my ideas out to kind of showcase them – not really to have them dissected (although I probably should have known that that’s what was going to happen). And Thrawn’s right: “Yes, that is the point, but it is laid to be picked apart and reassembled, not torn apart and scattered to the four winds.”
You replied that, “It was scattered to the four winds because neither side was willing to back down.” Now, it’s true that neither EEZ nor I were willing to back down – that’s readily apparent. But it was scattered to the four winds because nobody was helping me to actually work on it and improve it. Pointing out problems is almost useless if you don’t have a way to help the person fix those problems. I was not getting that kind of help when I needed it. Had I gotten that, I can assure you this whole mess would never have happened in the first place.
I welcome an examination to make sure that my foundation will hold. I don’t welcome a demolition crew coming in and trying to clear it away for a different foundation, because I know that mine isn’t that bad. Maybe it didn’t seem like a demolition crew to you guys and that wasn’t what you meant, but… it’s about my story, anyway, so maybe you could try to look at it from my angle?
Diplomatic or not, I think there are limits and you just passed yours.
I still don’t think I really passed my limits in my reaction to what I thought was being said. Now, if I misunderstood what was being said, then I’m not sure that my reaction even counts anymore, because it was based upon something that apparently wasn’t strictly real. And at any rate, I wasn’t aiming for any of that negative stuff (malice and so on) – I was aiming for strict honesty. If we can’t handle people who just shoot totally from their heads – yes, even if that includes what we might think is meanness – then we’ve got problems.
I don't particularly care at this point whether you hate me for pointing out the obvious or not, but I don't like it when people treat my friends like garbage, despite the respect I hold for them.
The only “obvious” that I’m seeing here is (a) you’re a loyal friend, and (b) you misread most (if not all) of what I said. So, with all due respect, I don’t really see any “obvious” here the way you’re seeing it – with all the misunderstanding floating around, “obvious” has suddenly gone into the realm of subjectivity.
I never treated EEZ like garbage, although I can think of one or two lines here and there that might make you think that I did. I don’t treat people like garbage. You know, you and EEZ have made some very sweeping judgments about what I said in just one post. That’s a pretty shaky reason to suddenly drop all respect for and friendship with the person who posted, no matter how bad she sounded. Because it was a onetime thing – you’ve never heard her talk like that before, and you have no idea what was going on her life or in her mind at the time.
So… does this really mean that you no longer think of me as a friend? Because… believe it or not, I still think of you and EEZ as my friends, and I still respect you two as much as ever. …You don’t have to say anything about it just yet – just please think about it, okay? …Don’t I sound more like the Sky you know and love (or loved, if you prefer)? Yes, that other post-in-question is still Sky, too, but that was a different side of her that doesn’t surface very often at all, and almost never online.
And I really hope that doesn’t make you lose respect or like for my works, or that you decide not to check out my stuff in the future. You know, the best part of a person can come out in his art. You already know that I’m a good artist, a good writer, and a fair MV-maker. Please don’t let my works suffer for my rash post – please continue to enjoy them! …Once my connection is good again, I actually have a couple new videos to upload! One is a Buzz & Warp vid, kinda for KJ; one is another BLoSC gen Mulan style; the newest is a Buzz & Zurg vid, a “sequel” – if you will – to Steel’s “Playing with the Big Boys.” Can you guess what it is? You guys should love it!
because who really wants to read a huge post filled with quotes in it that only serve to confuse you more than help you
I do. Multiple quotes have never confused me before, and I appreciate that kind point-to-point-ness so that I can see exactly what people think about this and that, and I have closure. Otherwise, how am I to know? I know it can take a long time, and you’ve seen yourselves that sometimes, it takes me days to answer posts because mine are so long, but I want to cover all the bases. I wouldn’t mind having to wait for a reply that’s a bit in coming if it means that all my points receive replies.
And yes, that was the sound of me being snippy because I am the one who started this thread last year in the first place, and I could have never imagined that it would go downhill just when ckret and I had been coming up with such great Zurg theories last night... this morning... never mind.
…I’m sorry that your thread got messed up, Steel – I really am! =(
So I will say right now that I third the closing of this thread and let that be the end of it. Because I actually agree with you; this has gone far too far already. And this is coming from someone who has an open mind and loves reading all sorts of theories and opinions, but cannot bear the stubbornness of some individuals here. (Yes, I am talking about Skyfire and EEZ.)
Hey, I have an open mind – I just don’t like to leave it open enough to let my brains fall out. …That was a joke, and it was a variation of something Saron actually said once in an email. You know, her cute little puns? I thought it was funny. …So yeah, I’m stubborn, and I’m not ashamed of it. I’d rather be stubborn than not be stubborn, if that makes any sense.
I enjoy reading all kinds of theories, too – opinions are a little different, but sometimes, yeah. But I (understandably) don’t appreciate it when those theories/opinions/whatever are trying to tear down what I’ve worked so hard on.
And it takes all kinds of people to make a world – or so I hear. Actually, I never liked that saying, but I guess it’s true. So, Steel, ya just hafta put up with us bullheads! ;D …That was humor, too, just to make sure that everybody understands that.
And yeah, I guess it did go too far. But that was everybody’s fault, not just mine.
I skip over the part about my brother here, because I already addressed it above.
Being spiteful is being malicious, and I detected maliciousness in her posts. That could have been a misreading on my part, just as she on her part misread EEZ's posts, so I guess we're both wrong here.
I guess we are – both wrong and misreading, I mean. *mopes* Gee, how can a couple of people who have so much interaction with each other get it so wrong?
I do not think that EEZ purposefully skipped; she merely condensed for the sake of clarity, or at least that is how I saw it. Now, if Skyfire wanted EEZ to notice some specifics on her posts, she could have pointed them out so EEZ could have examined them one-by-one. But I, for one, find reading long posts riddled with quotes tiring, as opposed to long posts clearly interspersed with points and sections, like some of ckret's in another thread on these forums, the "Is-Zurg-Buzz's-Dad?" debate thread, specifically.
Posts like that one of Ckret’s are great, but all that formatting takes even more time, y’know? But how was I really supposed to point out specifics? I was already quoting EEZ paragraph by paragraph – sometimes even line by line. *shrugs helplessly*
And I don’t find quote-filled posts confusing or tiring – and since the posts were being addressed specifically to me, shouldn’t that count for something?
At any rate, there’s a perfect case-in-point where I said something on a topic, and EEZ replied on the same topic without seeming to have read anything that I said about it, and I’ll get to that later.
And in closing on this point, there were several times in which I added to certain topics, and EEZ continued those topic, but only with what she was saying, and never acknowledging that I had said anything new on the matter at all. I can pull up every single instance and show you (and I probably will in the next post).
And, well, on the humour, that's EEZ for you; it's really easy to pick up once you get to know her. Or that could be just me living in the UK now and picking up on British humour or whatnot, I don't know. xD And perhaps her posts may have looked nicer because they were more condensed. Some of us do not have the time to answer every single point, but I am now making the time, besides my assignments, since you specifically pointed your dissatisfaction at this.
D’aww, Steel, school comes first – you didn’t have to! Although I do sincerely appreciate it. But let me point out that I never have the time to answer every single point – quickly. That’s why it takes me days sometimes to reply – because I don’t have enough time in one day. Trust me, my schedule’s as busy as anyone else’s, just in a different way, and it’s a bit more flexible, but that’s it.
Well, I’ve read quite a bit of British stuff (Tolkien, C. S. Lewis, even some of G. A. Henty), and in 12th grade, my literature study was British… And there are movies like Pride and Prejudice and My Fair Lady, etc… so I know what British humor is like. You really think that EEZ’s humor is like that? Honestly, I’ve never encountered her kind of humor anywhere else. *is baffled* I mean, I’ve laughed before at stuff that she’s said that was obviously funny, but if it’s subtle, then I guess I’m lost. =(
On the helpful bit: fair enough. You take what you want from it and ignore the rest. That is, after all, how humankind works. And the way I see it is that both Skyfire and EEZ need to bend with the wind, but that's what you get when you get two hard-heads together; neither will succumb easily or willingly.
True on that last part, but may I point out, in my defense, that I have bended? I can pull up quotes if you’d like, not only from the Zurg thread but from others, as well.
Yes, Skyfire was overly defensive, and yes, I saw her being condescending and mocking. Here are a few examples:
I’ll address this in my next post. But I never mocked, cross my heart. And I was being defensive, true, but not overly so. So… yeah, I’ll get back to that later. And I’ve already talked about the condescending part, so I won’t repeat myself.
Aw, thank you! …Even after all this?
...Which really drives the nail into the coffin, I'd say. And these are just a few examples. I don't have the patience to go back even further, or to mention more, but her overall tone is scathing and on a personal level, when EEZ never dragged Skyfire into anything, unless I missed something, which you will have to point out for me.
*soulful groan* That was sincere! I even had an XR heart-eyes smile after it, because I was trying to show that I was serious and that I didn’t want what I said to wreck our friendship. I guess I should have said more to make that clearer, so I am very, very sorry. But, Steel? somebody would have to be really sick to say that mockingly with an XR heart-eyes smile at the end.
…I actually can find one or two things that EEZ said that were indeed personal, or sounded like it.
And… well, I did mean to be scathing in some parts, to a certain extent. (Just for the record, I have never said anything like that before in my life.) Did I think, at the time, that EEZ deserved it? …I don’t get that worked-up over something without feeling that that reaction is deserved. Maybe I went about it the wrong way, but I honestly thought it was the only way I was going to really drive my points home and get her to listen to me. Because, sometimes, I honestly feel like I’m talking to a wall – at least I acknowledged what she said, whether or not I agreed with or liked it.
I already addressed the “four winds” bit, so I won’t repeat myself. And true, it can indeed be hard to translate tones over the Internet, which is one reason why I like to use smiley faces and little side comments so much – so that, hopefully, my tone and mood come across correctly. And then barring voice tones, I once read (in a fanfic, actually, so I’m not sure if it’s real or not, but I know that the author did TONS of research, so it very well could be) that 60% of communication is non-verbal. Then, I bet voice tones have to be another 10% at least; so when we’re talking over the Internet, we’re down to 30% communication! We’ve lost voice tones, facial expressions, gestures (some people don’t gesture much, but others do, myself included), posture, overall body language…
I totally agree that having your beliefs challenged makes them stronger – it was just a challenge I didn’t want to have to deal with in a topic that was really about what Zurg could be. I even said, at one point, that I thought it might be fun to do a debate down in the Spam section – ‘cause I wanted to keep the thread on-topic as much as possible. …My offer still stands. I’ve even done some research on Creationism and Evolution, and I’ve found some very interesting stuff that I’d like to share.
Why am I offering to start a new debate, considering what happened to the Zurg thread? Well, I think that, after this, we’re all going to be a lot more careful of what we say in the future. I think that we might be able to safely hold a debate – both sides would just have to be careful not to sound too authoritative at the risk of being condescending. What do you think?
Paradise Lost? Ohhh, I envy you! I’ve only ever read the… I think it was the prologue… for school. I want to read the rest! What was it like?
I’m gonna reiterate that Thrawn was NOT dragged into this. I share just about everything with him – and what I don’t share, he usually finds out, anyway. And he had something to say.
…He didn’t call you any names. O.o Yeah. I just checked over his post, and he really didn’t name-call.
Well, okay, so you didn’t like my tone. In your place, I probably would’ve given a piece of my mind, too, whether I was right or wrong. But I maintain that my reaction was justified in some parts, and in others, based off of misreading, Your Honor! (And the “Your Honor” part was humor, too – just so that’s clear.)
Evolution part here – already addressed above.
EVERYBODY IS GUILTY; WE MUST ALL BE SENTENCED TO SPEED TRAP DUTY. *cue groans*
I’s sorry, Steel. If it’s any condolence, I’m 100% positive I never misread your posts, and I’m certain that nothing in them bothered me. Gah, why did I have to post up the stupid anatomy in the first place?? It wasn’t worth it!
I think that Thrawn was indeed trying to see EEZ’s position, but he just doesn’t know her all that well yet. If he could know her for as long as I have, he’d probably understand her better than I do – he’s good at stuff like that.
WHY IN THE WORLD DOES ZURG KEEP A TROLL DOLL COLLECTION, OF ALL THINGS? WHAT IS IT WITH THIS GUY? WHY MUST HE MAKE INTELLECTUAL LIFE SO DIFFICULT ON US MERE MORTAL FANS?
…Wait a sec! I know who’s really guilty! It’s Zurg himself! He started it in the first place by being so doggone mysterious! xDDD
…Actually, it would be cool if Thrawn did join. WAIT!! OH NO, WHAT AM I SAYING?? IF HE JOINS, I’M DOOMED!! …Hey, that would make it the first sister/brother pair on the fan club, wouldn’t it? Not the first in the fandom, but here on the forum itself… I wonder if we would post on the same threads – since we discuss stuff all the time, it could be redundant, but then again, it might not…
AND HE HAS... um, well, hopefully a Zurgariffic Christmas surprise for us. We'll have to see about that.
...Which really drives the nail into the coffin, I'd say. And these are just a few examples. I don't have the patience to go back even further, or to mention more, but her overall tone is scathing and on a personal level, when EEZ never dragged Skyfire into anything, unless I missed something, which you will have to point out for me.
*soulful groan* That was sincere! I even had an XR heart-eyes smile after it, because I was trying to show that I was serious and that I didn’t want what I said to wreck our friendship. I guess I should have said more to make that clearer, so I am very, very sorry. But, Steel? somebody would have to be really sick to say that mockingly with an XR heart-eyes smile at the end.
…I actually can find one or two things that EEZ said that were indeed personal, or sounded like it.
And… well, I did mean to be scathing in some parts, to a certain extent. (Just for the record, I have never said anything like that before in my life.) Did I think, at the time, that EEZ deserved it? …I don’t get that worked-up over something without feeling that that reaction is deserved. Maybe I went about it the wrong way, but I honestly thought it was the only way I was going to really drive my points home and get her to listen to me. Because, sometimes, I honestly feel like I’m talking to a wall – at least I acknowledged what she said, whether or not I agreed with or liked it.
It was scattered to the four winds because neither side was willing to back down. And I guess it's a different point of view thing after all; kind of like the mix-up with ckret and I beforehand (I still love ya, gal xD). You can never really tell someone's tone over the internet. And yes, we all should be careful of referring to someone's beliefs and ideals, but I don't think it is wrong to challenge them. Having studied Paradise Lost, we talked about how having your ideas challenged can help you become stronger after the outcome, and I think this is a nice parallel to take into account here.
I already addressed the “four winds” bit, so I won’t repeat myself. And true, it can indeed be hard to translate tones over the Internet, which is one reason why I like to use smiley faces and little side comments so much – so that, hopefully, my tone and mood come across correctly. And then barring voice tones, I once read (in a fanfic, actually, so I’m not sure if it’s real or not, but I know that the author did TONS of research, so it very well could be) that 60% of communication is non-verbal. Then, I bet voice tones have to be another 10% at least; so when we’re talking over the Internet, we’re down to 30% communication! We’ve lost voice tones, facial expressions, gestures (some people don’t gesture much, but others do, myself included), posture, overall body language…
I totally agree that having your beliefs challenged makes them stronger – it was just a challenge I didn’t want to have to deal with in a topic that was really about what Zurg could be. I even said, at one point, that I thought it might be fun to do a debate down in the Spam section – ‘cause I wanted to keep the thread on-topic as much as possible. …My offer still stands. I’ve even done some research on Creationism and Evolution, and I’ve found some very interesting stuff that I’d like to share.
Why am I offering to start a new debate, considering what happened to the Zurg thread? Well, I think that, after this, we’re all going to be a lot more careful of what we say in the future. I think that we might be able to safely hold a debate – both sides would just have to be careful not to sound too authoritative at the risk of being condescending. What do you think?
Paradise Lost? Ohhh, I envy you! I’ve only ever read the… I think it was the prologue… for school. I want to read the rest! What was it like?
I thought this was a fun place too. And up until this point I have really enjoyed myself here. But no, I did not like Skyfire's tone at all towards EEZ, which was why I took it upon myself to say so in the first place. And heck, you can call me whatever names you want even though I haven't been calling you any... I am still perplexed at how you were dragged into this, anyway.
I’m gonna reiterate that Thrawn was NOT dragged into this. I share just about everything with him – and what I don’t share, he usually finds out, anyway. And he had something to say.
…He didn’t call you any names. O.o Yeah. I just checked over his post, and he really didn’t name-call.
Well, okay, so you didn’t like my tone. In your place, I probably would’ve given a piece of my mind, too, whether I was right or wrong. But I maintain that my reaction was justified in some parts, and in others, based off of misreading, Your Honor! (And the “Your Honor” part was humor, too – just so that’s clear.)
Evolution part here – already addressed above.
But if it's any condolence, I didn't detect poor grammar or bad writing in your post. It was actually pretty well-structured and well-thought of! And I apologize if my post drove you to come here. I guess I did read Sky's post wrong then. But then that means that you read EEZ's wrong as well. So everyone seems to share a portion in the blame here, just like ckret mentioned beforehand.
EVERYBODY IS GUILTY; WE MUST ALL BE SENTENCED TO SPEED TRAP DUTY. *cue groans*
And I never said that I did not like a cyborg!Zurg. I was merely interested in the mechanics and thought process behind it. Maybe it is simply my nature; I question anything and everything. I am a philosopher at heart, after all. But as much as it saddens me that we have reached such a dichotomy of opinions in a thread I really loved and wanted to contribute more to at a later date... this dispute should come to an end, right here and now.
I’s sorry, Steel. If it’s any condolence, I’m 100% positive I never misread your posts, and I’m certain that nothing in them bothered me. Gah, why did I have to post up the stupid anatomy in the first place?? It wasn’t worth it!
I just simply want to point out that you should also see it from where EEZ stands as well as where Skyfire stands. And if I sound angry, or detached, or I don't know how else I might be sounding over the internet, I apologize in advance. I don't mean to sound like this, but I just don't see the logic behind arguing any more. All sides need to admit that they were wrong, and leave this all in the past.
I think that Thrawn was indeed trying to see EEZ’s position, but he just doesn’t know her all that well yet. If he could know her for as long as I have, he’d probably understand her better than I do – he’s good at stuff like that.
And go back to the lovely theories again that are untainted by personal opinions! Like Zurg's troll doll collection: DISCUSS!
WHY IN THE WORLD DOES ZURG KEEP A TROLL DOLL COLLECTION, OF ALL THINGS? WHAT IS IT WITH THIS GUY? WHY MUST HE MAKE INTELLECTUAL LIFE SO DIFFICULT ON US MERE MORTAL FANS?
…Wait a sec! I know who’s really guilty! It’s Zurg himself! He started it in the first place by being so doggone mysterious! xDDD
...And if it's any worth, I think you should join! D: It's always great to find another fellow thinker such as myself! I was rather miffed at the start of this post to be honest, but now that I've blown off all my hot steam I'm ready to put it all to good use!
…Actually, it would be cool if Thrawn did join. WAIT!! OH NO, WHAT AM I SAYING?? IF HE JOINS, I’M DOOMED!! …Hey, that would make it the first sister/brother pair on the fan club, wouldn’t it? Not the first in the fandom, but here on the forum itself… I wonder if we would post on the same threads – since we discuss stuff all the time, it could be redundant, but then again, it might not…
AND HE HAS... um, well, hopefully a Zurgariffic Christmas surprise for us. We'll have to see about that.