mslyoness
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Post by mslyoness on Aug 21, 2010 10:53:43 GMT -5
...for a little poem. Er, technically song lyrics. (If not, I'll happily move it)
So yeah. I have this bad habit of writing lyrics about my favorite shows/manga/movies/whatever, and here, ladies and gentlemen, is a Wine-inspired piece. (Do I ever post anything non-Wine? XD)
I dance between the open doors I feel like I’ve seen you before I guess I don’t remember when, But it’ll come to me again Shining glass and blueish flames It will never be the same Give me all you have to give, A simple smile can make me live
Mark my words you’re lovely My beauty, you’re above me There’s a sadness in your voice And I don’t have a choice, Choice, Choice I think I’m going down When there’s no one else around You can’t pretend it’s nothing Cuz I see your eyes widen, I see your eyes widen when you look at me When you look at me, When you look at me So just look at me
I’ve stumbled upon something new But don’t know what I’m supposed to do When everybody wears a mask, Honesty’s too much to ask Painful scars and burning skin I’ve come too far not to win Losing’s not an option here, And loss is what I really fear
Mark my words you’re lovely My beauty, you’re above me There’s a sadness in your voice And I don’t have a choice, Choice, Choice I think I’m going down When there’s no one else around You can’t pretend it’s nothing Cuz I see your eyes widen, I see your eyes widen when you look at me, When you look at me, When you look at me So just look at me!
...Yup. I may at some point use this in a fic, or maybe not. Anyway, it has no title. Anybody have an idea? (*is not good at naming things*)
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Post by Skyfire on Aug 26, 2010 6:09:02 GMT -5
Oh wow, this is good! I can't write songs without writing them to a pre-existing song to save my life. Yes, this is the right place. *nods* Would you mind if I quoted this song sometime in my fics? Like this verse: I’ve stumbled upon something new But don’t know what I’m supposed to do When everybody wears a mask, Honesty’s too much to ask Painful scars and burning skin I’ve come too far not to win Losing’s not an option here, And loss is what I really fear...Especially the second half, is really so very Anakin Skywalker. I'd love to be able to quote that in the SW fic I'm doing right now. Y'know, "Just Look at Me" sounds like a fair title! ;D
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Post by mslyoness on Sept 30, 2010 18:07:49 GMT -5
Why of COURSE you can use this! I'm flattered. Okay, "Just Look At Me" it is!
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