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Post by Alohilani on May 22, 2007 13:57:28 GMT -5
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Post by livielightyear on May 22, 2007 16:22:42 GMT -5
That fic rawked....
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Post by ab103 on May 22, 2007 19:14:01 GMT -5
Hmm, this reminds me of how XR can control his body parts when they're not attached. Of course, I just always assumed that he could control them with his mind, but I never dove into a idea like this! Good job.
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Post by eez on May 22, 2007 21:23:09 GMT -5
I liked it...but you...k...kil...OH I can't bring myself to say it! you KILLED Zurg! NOOOOOOO! you squashed him like a purple gnat on a star cruiser window shield! you crushed him like a purple soda can who was stepped on by a really big, big, BIG guy! Need I say more analogies? *sob* what a horrid image! Now who's going to take care of Xrgthung?!
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Post by mjmarcxs on May 23, 2007 4:48:09 GMT -5
I'll copy and paste my DA response for the fic:
That was a very interesting fic. Very well woven and the ending was quite surprising. Yet again everyone was in charater and the quotes in the end fit XR perfectly.
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Post by Alohilani on May 23, 2007 7:46:50 GMT -5
I liked it...but you...k...kil...OH I can't bring myself to say it! you KILLED Zurg!! Well... XD; I didn't really mean to KILL him, you'll notice Mira points out they don't really know he's dead... Evil Emperors can take quite a beating... he's supposed to come out of it slightly squashed but okay. XP I... really, really hate killing characters off. D: |
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Post by eez on May 23, 2007 8:50:52 GMT -5
Oh...sorry. it's just that I read 'killed' and then 'Zurg' and just couldn't finish that sentence without a teardrop of sorrow. You are right though...Evil Emperors-heck even regular ones-don't go away. It's like they're obsessive boyfriends/girlfriends
Wait...how is ANYONE going to come out of being squashed from a dreadnought that weighs the size of a small moon?! xD
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Post by Alohilani on May 23, 2007 9:02:41 GMT -5
I... figured his armor was really tough... and cartoon characters have the resilience of foam rubber, too.  |
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Post by aerinsol on Jun 23, 2007 5:16:35 GMT -5
whoah, serious XR!
exactly what's an overhaul? a memory wipe?
as for the story... it was kinda scary, but I like it... XR having the potential and the power to take over the galaxy...
I'd thought of this before, this ability to manipulate technology, and I think I'm a little more thoroughly convinced. Our little XR's gifted! whoah, Jedi XR!
wow, i wonder what would happen if he and Nos ever faced off ? don't go to the dark side XR! D:
I hope you write a bit more on this subject, it's very intriguing, dark, and can actually work out!
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Post by eez on Jun 23, 2007 13:54:40 GMT -5
Hmm, tough armor and foam rubber. Makes sense to me!
Jedi XR! That would be awesome! Him wielding a double lightsaber while NOS-4-A2 wields two individual ones like Asaaj Ventress! Oh man...calm down, my beating heart!
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Post by Alohilani on Jun 24, 2007 12:12:23 GMT -5
Hmm... well, I do have a couple more ideas...
Maybe I should make this into a chaptered story. (Facing off against NOS-4-A2... wow 1337 why aren't you writing stuff? D8)
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Post by aerinsol on Jun 24, 2007 23:51:18 GMT -5
because i don't have teh skillz to write XR as well as you do! >(
lol, but it's true, i've said it before, i suck at describing things the way i want it, and make things so that they create the feeling in the room...
besides, my writing's way rusty...
the only thing i'm good at is chucking out plot bunnies!
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Post by eez on Jun 25, 2007 0:59:47 GMT -5
Me neither! I can't delve into XR's multiple facets....like a diamond, there's different paths everywhere. *end mentor state* I hate it when it does that...gotta lay off the JuJu Juice!
Kiiiiiila! *whines* You should really make some more XR ficcys! You give him such character! The boys down in the studio only showed one side of him. The shallow, sarcastic, quirky side! Oh how I wish I could make them pump out more episodes. That'll be the day. Then again, it might not be a kid's show if all the characters where to become more indepth. Ah well! We need more sophisticated shows anyway!
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Post by aerinsol on Jun 25, 2007 1:23:03 GMT -5
but that's what fanfics are for!
think about it, it's a kid's show, the kids aren't gonna like it if we had deep characters being emo...
it's up to the fanfic writers to open up the character's potential... and in a good way, the writers left us enough information to be free with writing so many potential answers and all could be right, such as, Zurg.
you may gripe that they never made clear whether he was a robot or organic or cyborg, but it gives us the chance to find a way to make all theories true! he could be a dancing cupcake if we made it work! (which would be astoundingly hard to do, but fun all the same... maybe in a crack fic... >) )
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Post by eez on Jun 25, 2007 1:27:24 GMT -5
LOLLERCOASTER! Dancing evil cupcake man from Pastrie Beta Seven!! I'm already having too much fun with that one!
True. You have a very valid point there. It wouldn't be fun to watch if all the characters where somewhat blue in a sense. Amen for fan fics!
I kinda wish they did clarify Zurg...it'd make life much easier. But if they did that, I wouldn't be able to make my own scenario! *fingers soda cup* Well! I guess it's better that they didn't then! I've grown found of torturing him XD
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BG FTW!!
XDDDDDD No comment, folks
