Scene from The Slayer

[BandGeek727]

www.fanfiction.net/s/3735138/1/Direct_Hit

So, baryonyx requested that I write a scene from "The Slayer," the way I did with "Fear." This is the result.

Thanks for being so patient, baryonyx. Hope you enjoy it!

[ab103]

I think I love you.

[overcast]

Dear Lord... That was intense! Now I have to see that episode! I don't care if the animators got lazy on Nos! I will still see it! One of these days I hope!

[Saturn]

I second Ab103's emotion. o.o
THAT. WAS. AWSOME!!

And after "Fear," I had to be a little inventive about the way I described NOS's attack. ...I feel so cruel, though...

You feel cruel? I enjoy reading books that depict pain in that kind of way! I had fun writing my little crap-fic I put up. You shouldn't feel guilty, okay? No one should feel guilty for their writing. Not until Kila shows up. o.o

[BandGeek727]

galacticnutcase said:

And after "Fear," I had to be a little inventive about the way I described NOS's attack. ...I feel so cruel, though...

You feel cruel?

I guess I just feel bad; I seem to put XR in pain a lot. But I keep coming up with ideas like these...

I think I love you.

Because of this? ...Wow... I'm so glad you all like it so much!

[RocketMeowth]

=O.O= *stares blankly at the page as she completes reading it*

*4 hours pass by*

=O.O= *still staring at it*

*10 hours pass by*

... HOLY CRAP DUDE! They way you describe things, the way you force those images into our minds, the way you make our feelings match that of XR... you're amazing! I haven't read anything so intense, so smooth, so profetional since I read Neo's story on PE2K.

You would make an awesome horror story writer. You know EXACTLY how to set the mood and get your readers to not only view what's happening, but FEEL the emotions being thrown out there.

You need to write more of this stuff. Because believe me, I am not one to read often (I hardly read to begin with) and I've read your "Fear" story at least fifty times. Now I must print this and read it over and over.

Yeah... I may sound nuts by doing that, but I can't help it. When I read something that can chill me to the bone and keep me reading no matter how much I want to stop, I've gotta print it!

Maybe you could take a look at two recent chapters I wrote for my story? I would love to hear an experts opinion on how I wrote them.

=^^= Nya

[BandGeek727]

Wow, that just.... wow. I don't think I've ever received such praise for my writing.
You think I would make a good horror story writer? Wow... I never considered... I didn't think I was that good! I don't even like scary movies!

You printed out my stories? I've done that with fanfictions... And to hear that someone likes mine enough to do that is an honor. Thank you so much.

Expert? Wow, I don't know if I'd say that... but sure, I'll take a look at your story! Fur and Feathers, right?

Thank you, you just... wow. I'm speechless.

[RocketMeowth]

It's not Fur and Feathers. It's a Pokemon story I've been writing for a year now. I'll PM you the two chapters I was talking about.

Also, you deserved every bit of praise. Maybe try to write a horror thing that isn't BLoSC related. Something purely from your mind. I'd like to see where you go with something like that.

=^^= Nya

[BandGeek727]

Ah, okay.

Well, thank you again.

I guess I could try a non-BLoSC horror story... but to be honest with you, I'm generally not that morbid. I just... generally don't think that way. I have no idea where that fic came from. I think I just really sympathize with XR and try to win him even more sympathy.

[RocketMeowth]

lol
That's an odd way to put it. But, you do accomplish just what you said about sympathizing more for XR.

=^^= Nya

[BandGeek727]

*shrug* I really think that's what it is...
And thank you; I'm glad you think so!