Old!fic

[Alohilani]

WARNING: THERE'S LOTS OF IT.

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Blah, sorry it's all in bold. LJ messed up.

[BandGeek727]

FICS! 8DDD

Sweet. ;D I'll have to read them when I'm more awake. ;P

Love it so far, though.

[levy120]

Okay that took some time now xD
I didn't get the camping stuff to be honest it seemed somewhat... off to what you usually do... and cutting off the Tika Part there is just eeevil xx"

Best line:

“Everyone expects you to be this awesome, like, action figure guy!”

This one made me laugh so hard... xD

[Alohilani]

I didn't get the camping stuff either. XD It's so frigging emo.

[Spirit-of-Twilight]

Those are really good! You're a very talented writer! ^^

[BandGeek727]

Well, took me long enough to log in and leave a review.

I liked the Force battle! It was intense. ^^
"You coward..." 83

You're so good at writing him.
I wish you weren't so hard on your old work.

"He got to his feet with all the speed and grace of an old guy with rheumatism."
XDD
"And his stories were fascinating. Not in a good way, though. Something about them was like… like watching a car wreck. And not being able to stop it. Or look away."
You have such good metaphors. ;D

Aaand... do I detect a hint of Marred? 83

[Alohilani]

bandgeek727 said:

I wish you weren't so hard on your old work.

But I enjoy it. XDD

Aaand... do I detect a hint of Marred? 83

...where?

I don't really remember what was in there anymore XD

[BandGeek727]

King said:

bandgeek727 said:

I wish you weren't so hard on your old work.

But I enjoy it. XDD

Oh, well, if you enjoy it... X3

Aaand... do I detect a hint of Marred? 83

...where?

I don't really remember what was in there anymore XD

“No one’s ever gonna love me,” he wailed as soon as she was out of the room.
Mira turned to stare at him. “What do you mean?”
“Dad doesn’t love me, 42 didn’t love me- Carrie doesn’t- love me-”
She went towards him, sitting down next to him and putting her arms around his shoulders to pull him close.
“Now, listen here. I love you. Okay? Now tell me what happened.”
She felt him go still,

It was short, but it was sweet. 83

[Alohilani]

Ohh, I forgot about that... awww. X3;

[BandGeek727]

Ooh, ooh, I know this is really old and all, but... I forgot to say I really liked that you named Nebula Adam. *snicker* That one made me laugh.

[Alohilani]

Heh, well, I couldn't resist X3

[BandGeek727]

The thing is, though, it fits him! XD

[Alohilani]

Heh, yeah X3