|
|
Post by Alohilani on Oct 16, 2007 11:26:03 GMT -5
|
|
|
|
Post by RedRage on Oct 16, 2007 16:57:10 GMT -5
Well, overall you already know what I think of the third one, I specially liked the well done fore shooting on his feet. If I may add some constructive criticism, Tike's eye looks a bit weird. I can tell the second one is old, not just because of the description in deviant art, but because you draw him differently now : p I read that you had problems with making them have eye contact (for lack of pupil) on the first pic, I know you didn't ask for it, but I made a slight modification to illustrate how you could do it using guide lines. I know that in very old comic dashed lines were used to denote that the character was looking at someone/something but in this case the dashed line is not meant to be in the finished image. img.photobucket.com/albums/v76/RedRage/stuff/bg%20to%20layer/eyecontact.jpgAlso, so much romance... You should draw more action stuff!. ... Let me change that context, you should draw the characters battling more and stuff : D That makes Happy |
|
|
|
Post by Alohilani on Oct 17, 2007 10:09:29 GMT -5
Oooh, thanks for the tip. 8DDD And yeah, her eye does look a bit weird there...
Action stuff, huh? Well, to be honest I usually never draw any action beyond cartoony slapstick comedy, because... well, I just don't know what I'd draw. XP;;; I've... never really tried to draw action. But then again I never really drew romance until about a year ago, so... I dunno. I'll see if I come up with anything. XD
|
|
