Post by NinjaRabbit on Dec 13, 2007 20:08:51 GMT -5
Okay, this is my OC: EL.
I actually went back and edited her story, because I thought it sounded too "Mary Sueish".
Name: EL (doesn’t stand for anything, her creator just thought it sounded cool)
Species: Robot
Created by: Dr. Lana Apogee - she specializes in robotics development and says EL is one of her masterpieces
Physical description:
She is a metallic silver color, with diamond shaped eyes. She is only slightly taller than XR. Her feet are designed like human feet - no treads. In fact, she looks kind of human-like in her appearance, but you can definitely tell she is a robot. (Kind of like the Bebe Robots on Kim Possible)
Unlike many robots, she has hair made out of thin strands of silver. (Her creator added this feature to make her feel more human-like) Her hair ends right at her shoulders - it is straight, not thick, and she has bangs.
She has a female figure, but has an extremely skinny body. (Her enemies refer to her as “a metal stick”) The metallic color ends at her chest, which is blue. Her lower body looks like she is wearing a blue skirt, but it is not a skirt, it’s metal. Her legs have long “boots” which are white with blue stripes on the sides, and her arms are the same color and she appears to have long “gloves”. (The boots and gloves are metal)
She has a jet pack on her back, with which wings come out. (So creative...)
Special Abilities:
- Has jet-assist rockets on her feet that help her glide above the floor. This is how she looks tall people in the eye.
- Can shoot laser blasts from her eyes.
- Her left arm can transform into a cup like attachment which can block shots or redirect them to hit her opponent.
- Her right arm can shoot blasts from a gun attachment that comes from her wrist.
- Both of her hands can be shot like grappling hooks
- Her metal body can heal itself when it gets cut (this ability sometimes malfunctions, and it doesn’t work from bites from NOS 4 A2)
- Can stretch her neck and turn her head 360 degrees
- Flight, not really an ability since everyone has this
- Very acrobatic for a robot
Flaws:
- Her body can be reconstructed, but not as easily as XR’s can.
- No real protection or padding. If caught she can be easily destroyed.
- She can only glide for a short length of time
- Can get easily fatigued if fighting for long periods of time
- Even though she is agile, she is not very strong
- Delicate electronic system, if she is exposed to large amounts of static or electric shock this causes her to stall, stutter and give slow reaction time
- Needs to be recharged frequetly
- Her eyesight is not very strong if she shoots laser blasts frequently
Personality
She is a bit naive, high strung and can occasionally get hyper. She likes to befriend people, and comes across as being very clingy, especially when she meets with XR. She is exceedingly polite (almost to an annoying level), except with her enemies. When she's around enemies, she refuses to talk or if she does talk she is extremely cold. She never intentionally tries to hurt her friends, and when XR gets annoyed and brushes her away, she thinks it's her fault and apologizes profusely.
She is shy and can gets scared easily, but when she meets someone she wants to be friends with, she will quickly warm up to them. She is easily distracted, which is very bad for her. Sometimes she berates herself for something that she didn't do wrong. She doesn't like attention or being in the spotlight, and when she is, she gets embarrassed. She can get obsessive over little things, which annoys those who are close to her. She has low self confidence, and continually thinks that she looks small and ugly.
Despite her weaknesses, she is sweet and loyal. She is eager to help and be a friend. She never tells secrets and will do what is asked of her. Her timid and mild personality puts her at odds with some people, gets her pushed around by others, or gets her well liked. (It all depends on the person she's around.)
(I might add more to her personality if I can remember what I thought up)
Story
Dr. Lana Apogee (I'll add a description of her on this site later) grew up on TradeWorld as an only child, and had always wanted a sister or a friend. After studying robotics and graduating at the top of her class, she works on projects for government agencies, building high-quality robots that they can use for their line of work. After getting a lot of income, she decides to work on a personal project: building herself a robot friend.
Thus, she creates EL, who becomes her lab partner and the friend that she never had. A year after her creation, Dr. Lana Apogee disappears mysteriously one night. After alerting the authorities to her creator's disappearance, she decides to take matters into her own hands and go look for her missing creator herself. Thus, she becomes a space nomad.
Wandering around the galaxy, she makes a few friends, and is confronted with many dangers. When she is on TradeWorld, she gets attacked by robot muggers, but is saved just in the nick of time by Team Lightyear.
She explains her story to Team Lightyear, and they decide to take her back with them to Star Command. They tell her she could get a job there if she needs more income. She agrees, and Team Lightyear vows to help find her creator.
I actually went back and edited her story, because I thought it sounded too "Mary Sueish".
Name: EL (doesn’t stand for anything, her creator just thought it sounded cool)
Species: Robot
Created by: Dr. Lana Apogee - she specializes in robotics development and says EL is one of her masterpieces
Physical description:
She is a metallic silver color, with diamond shaped eyes. She is only slightly taller than XR. Her feet are designed like human feet - no treads. In fact, she looks kind of human-like in her appearance, but you can definitely tell she is a robot. (Kind of like the Bebe Robots on Kim Possible)
Unlike many robots, she has hair made out of thin strands of silver. (Her creator added this feature to make her feel more human-like) Her hair ends right at her shoulders - it is straight, not thick, and she has bangs.
She has a female figure, but has an extremely skinny body. (Her enemies refer to her as “a metal stick”) The metallic color ends at her chest, which is blue. Her lower body looks like she is wearing a blue skirt, but it is not a skirt, it’s metal. Her legs have long “boots” which are white with blue stripes on the sides, and her arms are the same color and she appears to have long “gloves”. (The boots and gloves are metal)
She has a jet pack on her back, with which wings come out. (So creative...)
Special Abilities:
- Has jet-assist rockets on her feet that help her glide above the floor. This is how she looks tall people in the eye.
- Can shoot laser blasts from her eyes.
- Her left arm can transform into a cup like attachment which can block shots or redirect them to hit her opponent.
- Her right arm can shoot blasts from a gun attachment that comes from her wrist.
- Both of her hands can be shot like grappling hooks
- Her metal body can heal itself when it gets cut (this ability sometimes malfunctions, and it doesn’t work from bites from NOS 4 A2)
- Can stretch her neck and turn her head 360 degrees
- Flight, not really an ability since everyone has this
- Very acrobatic for a robot
Flaws:
- Her body can be reconstructed, but not as easily as XR’s can.
- No real protection or padding. If caught she can be easily destroyed.
- She can only glide for a short length of time
- Can get easily fatigued if fighting for long periods of time
- Even though she is agile, she is not very strong
- Delicate electronic system, if she is exposed to large amounts of static or electric shock this causes her to stall, stutter and give slow reaction time
- Needs to be recharged frequetly
- Her eyesight is not very strong if she shoots laser blasts frequently
Personality
She is a bit naive, high strung and can occasionally get hyper. She likes to befriend people, and comes across as being very clingy, especially when she meets with XR. She is exceedingly polite (almost to an annoying level), except with her enemies. When she's around enemies, she refuses to talk or if she does talk she is extremely cold. She never intentionally tries to hurt her friends, and when XR gets annoyed and brushes her away, she thinks it's her fault and apologizes profusely.
She is shy and can gets scared easily, but when she meets someone she wants to be friends with, she will quickly warm up to them. She is easily distracted, which is very bad for her. Sometimes she berates herself for something that she didn't do wrong. She doesn't like attention or being in the spotlight, and when she is, she gets embarrassed. She can get obsessive over little things, which annoys those who are close to her. She has low self confidence, and continually thinks that she looks small and ugly.
Despite her weaknesses, she is sweet and loyal. She is eager to help and be a friend. She never tells secrets and will do what is asked of her. Her timid and mild personality puts her at odds with some people, gets her pushed around by others, or gets her well liked. (It all depends on the person she's around.)
(I might add more to her personality if I can remember what I thought up)
Story
Dr. Lana Apogee (I'll add a description of her on this site later) grew up on TradeWorld as an only child, and had always wanted a sister or a friend. After studying robotics and graduating at the top of her class, she works on projects for government agencies, building high-quality robots that they can use for their line of work. After getting a lot of income, she decides to work on a personal project: building herself a robot friend.
Thus, she creates EL, who becomes her lab partner and the friend that she never had. A year after her creation, Dr. Lana Apogee disappears mysteriously one night. After alerting the authorities to her creator's disappearance, she decides to take matters into her own hands and go look for her missing creator herself. Thus, she becomes a space nomad.
Wandering around the galaxy, she makes a few friends, and is confronted with many dangers. When she is on TradeWorld, she gets attacked by robot muggers, but is saved just in the nick of time by Team Lightyear.
She explains her story to Team Lightyear, and they decide to take her back with them to Star Command. They tell her she could get a job there if she needs more income. She agrees, and Team Lightyear vows to help find her creator.