Robbie Valiant, P.I.
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Proud Veggie Fan- "Some people are so open-minded their brains fall out."
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Post by Robbie Valiant, P.I. on Jul 11, 2008 15:47:52 GMT -5
Small comment on Chapter 5- I always thought it was spelled teryllium, like the real-life element beryllium, but with a T.
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Post by Spirit-of-Twilight on Jul 11, 2008 15:55:18 GMT -5
Teryllium is a real material, I think it's used for golf clubs and pipes. It's either made from or related in some way to Beryllium.
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Post by Alohilani on Jul 11, 2008 18:02:45 GMT -5
Awwwww... That chapter really tugged at my heartstrings. So much emotion, and so well written! Thanks!
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Post by levy120 on Jul 12, 2008 3:57:44 GMT -5
I believe to remember that part... you did post that one of livejournal once, didn't you? xD
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Post by BandGeek727 on Jul 13, 2008 14:17:21 GMT -5
Darn it, I take way too long to log in and write a review. >.<
Okay - I loved these last two chapters! May's character is amazing! X3 And she makes such a great contrast to XR.
Aw, that was so cute. :3 Chapter 5; I really loved the first part for - well, obvious reasons. ;P The second half was just amazing writing. I second Spirit, incredibly emotional. That part with the lamppost, oh man... And the title, LAWL! XD
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Post by Alohilani on Jul 13, 2008 17:27:56 GMT -5
Thank you! <333 Thank you so much!!
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Post by BandGeek727 on Jul 13, 2008 22:48:10 GMT -5
You're so, so welcome! <3
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Post by Alohilani on Jul 18, 2008 14:40:19 GMT -5
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Post by levy120 on Jul 19, 2008 2:10:23 GMT -5
I loved that chapter... So much tension <3
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Post by Alohilani on Jul 19, 2008 9:43:32 GMT -5
Thanks!
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Post by Spirit-of-Twilight on Jul 22, 2008 19:36:16 GMT -5
Aw. Poor XR... Another great chapter, though! Lol, Booster xD
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Post by BandGeek727 on Jul 24, 2008 13:17:17 GMT -5
...Well, I was going to log in and say how much suspense you're leaving me in, but I guess by this point I don't have much longer to wait, do I? < I'm still in suspense. X3 This chapter was so amazing. The end especially was incredibly emotional - I almost started crying for the little guy. :< This is quickly becoming one of the best fanfictions I've ever read, and I can't wait to see where you go with it. Oh the irony. 83
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Post by Alohilani on Jul 24, 2008 15:59:31 GMT -5
Aah! Thank you! <333 I'm so glad you're enjoying it.
-whistles- High praise indeed. I'll do my best to keep on earning it. 83
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Post by Alohilani on Jul 25, 2008 12:43:42 GMT -5
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Post by Alohilani on Aug 1, 2008 21:57:14 GMT -5
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