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Post by Alohilani on Aug 6, 2008 12:20:39 GMT -5
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Post by levy120 on Aug 9, 2008 7:31:21 GMT -5
shouldn't there meanwhile have been an update? @@
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Post by Alohilani on Aug 9, 2008 12:13:50 GMT -5
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Post by Spirit-of-Twilight on Aug 9, 2008 19:20:13 GMT -5
I love Kila in these last 2 chapters. She's flippin awesome.
I also loved the interaction between XR and Mira in chapter 8. And I keep noticing you have such a unique writing style, I really like it. Some of the creative ways to choose to describe things... it makes for a very interesting read. I anxiously await your next update!
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Post by Alohilani on Aug 9, 2008 19:45:47 GMT -5
Thank you!! 8DD
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Post by Alohilani on Aug 15, 2008 9:48:50 GMT -5
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Post by Spirit-of-Twilight on Aug 15, 2008 13:52:57 GMT -5
Heheh, Kila on the hoverboard, that was great xD
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Post by Alohilani on Aug 17, 2008 13:23:01 GMT -5
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Post by Alohilani on Aug 25, 2008 16:51:07 GMT -5
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Post by levy120 on Aug 28, 2008 7:03:46 GMT -5
You know, with a chapter like this, I'm kinda glad the update is late, since we don't have to wait so long now til the next update...
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Post by Alohilani on Aug 29, 2008 13:38:01 GMT -5
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Post by Robbie Valiant, P.I. on Aug 29, 2008 14:17:53 GMT -5
Nice fic. Didn't have the kind of ending I was hoping for, but I still thoroughly enjoyed it, and am now looking forward very much to the sequel.
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Post by levy120 on Aug 29, 2008 14:39:28 GMT -5
Chapter 12 was SO WHAT a runninggag chapter... I LOVED that xD Buzz was great there x3
Sooo quoteable xD
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Post by Alohilani on Aug 29, 2008 15:33:49 GMT -5
What do you mean?
Please tell me, it helps me improve.
And thanks so much, both of you! 8DD It means a lot. <3
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Post by Robbie Valiant, P.I. on Aug 29, 2008 15:37:32 GMT -5
What do you mean? Please tell me, it helps me improve. And thanks so much, both of you! 8DD It means a lot. <3 Well, I was hoping for a bit more closure. But, that's just me. When I read a series, even of fics, what I expect are single stories, that can be taken singularly, that lead to a grand finale. Sort of the way New Series Doctor Who has worked, single episodes all have a plot that's satisfactorily resolved in episode, but ends up setting up elements that lead to the arc climax at the end of the season.
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