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Post by Tonetone1224 on Apr 19, 2009 15:26:37 GMT -5
LOL. Thats kinda funny
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Post by xrsmechainic15 on Apr 19, 2009 15:35:17 GMT -5
i've got an idea for chap 4 so i'll post that today.later.sigh.pops knukles "Let's get to work!"
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Post by Warp Darkmatter on Apr 19, 2009 15:46:56 GMT -5
Yay! *sits on edge of seat to wait for more*
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Post by xrsmechainic15 on Apr 19, 2009 16:10:56 GMT -5
chap 4! ------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Sam's pov I stared out of the window in my room.on the desk infront of me was xr's arm and a screwdriver.I sighed. "Daniel,what were you doing on that planet?" I thought to myself as stars flew past the window. my finger's gingerly tapped the desk. "he was coming from the area where the attack was hitting us.how? why?"
a knock came at my door."hey SAM, it's me.are you done with my arm yet?"xr said impatiently.
"not unless you want a totally taken apart arm with many parts you can't carry." i said sarcastically.
"fine.I'll just be armless forever!"he said angrily.I smirked.
"OK fine by me.less work."silence at the door.
"okay,I'll wait."
"why don't you do something to entertain yourself, why don't you arm wrestle with booster?"I started to laugh so hard,i cried and fell out of my chair.
"ha-ha,very funny, you should be a comedian."
"you can come in you know,i want to see your face so i can laugh harder!"the door opened and he walked in.he just glared down on me while i was on the floor.seeing this i laughed even harder than before.I got up,wiping the tears from my eyes."it's almost done just be patient." i got in my chair and put on the finishing touches on his arm. i handed him his arm.
he swiped it away and put it in it's socket."you think you're sooo funny and such."I couldn't help but smile.
"yes,yes i do."suddenly the ship lurched forward and i toppled untop of xr.I got up.my face was a little red. "what was that?!"
"ahhhhhhhh! we're under attack!"he said while he got up ran out.
"well i know who's not brave on this ship!" I called after him. I walked into the control room.
"it wasn't an attack I don't think,"Mira said looking at some sort of scanner"just an engine blew."
"that's impossible i checked all the engines yesterday!" I said.
"well just to be sure,xr and SAM you check the engines,while booster and i check the hull for breaches."buzz said in a commanding order.
"great."i said unenthusiastically.
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Post by Tonetone1224 on Apr 19, 2009 16:13:59 GMT -5
cool. I love it already
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Post by xrsmechainic15 on Apr 19, 2009 16:15:56 GMT -5
i couldn't help it with the arm jokes! i'm at the city library posting this and when i typed the arm wrestling part i just started to laugh.Out loud.everyone was staring at me.
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Post by xrsmechainic15 on Apr 19, 2009 16:16:45 GMT -5
g2g 4 now! i'll be back!
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Post by Tonetone1224 on Apr 19, 2009 16:17:09 GMT -5
That happened to me too. It is really ambaresing, but back on topic, i love the arm jokes too
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Post by Warp Darkmatter on Apr 19, 2009 16:21:19 GMT -5
Nice chapter. Love the arm jokes!
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Post by xrsmechainic15 on Apr 19, 2009 20:59:22 GMT -5
chap5 ----------------------------------------------------------- "sure is dark down here."xr said trying to make a conversation. he held a flashlight in his hand."man I must've looked like a coward earlier."he thought.
"yeah,It's a little uncomfortable." sam said without any feeling in her voice."It's almost as bad as...No! You promised yourself, you wouldn't think of that night!"she yelled at herself in her thoughts. she looked at the floor.
"Sam, are you afraid of the dark?"xr said out of nowhere.she looked at him for a moment.they just stood there. breaking eye contact she looked away and hid her eyes under her bangs. "she always does that when she feels uncomfortable about something."he noted mentally.
"Krack!"an explosion erupted a few feet infront of them.
"xr." he looked at her
"yeah?"
"that wasn't the engine."she said with a little hint of fear in her voice.
"sooo right." a voice that xr recognized immediately
"sam! Run!"xr got infront of sam and let out all his big guns.
"cute."the voice said.a figure walked out of the mist.his skin was light blue and had a giant mechanical arm.but his was nothing like hers.his retracted into a giant gun.he aimed it at them. "hey kid.name's warp darkmatter."he tried to look cool.
"nice to meet you."a voice behind them said.she turned to see...
"buzz!"she said.she pointed to the warp guy."who the heck is this?!"
no answer came but insted a lot of shooting. sam ducked down behind xr."do they usually meet like this?" she whispered.
"yeah.but it's been more violent than before." xr was suprised to see her hiding behind him.
"great."
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Post by xrsmechainic15 on Apr 19, 2009 21:02:09 GMT -5
man bed's in a few. i'll make more chapter's 2marrow.
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Post by xrsmechainic15 on Apr 23, 2009 18:55:48 GMT -5
chap 6 -------------------------------------- Xr's pov
Buzz and warp hadn't stopped shooting and it's starting to get dangerous. "xr, we gotta get outta here. buzz isn't gonna stop." sam said frightened.she was clinging onto my arm until...
"come with me." a voice said from behind us.it was Mira. she was teleporting through the floor.
"sam you first."she smiled at me, then grabbed Mira's hand and she was gone."you want suma me dirtbags!"I yelled and pulled out all the big guns again.
sam's pov
I was running after Mira in the hall when.."crash!"was all I heard when I turned to see a figure standing in front of a huge hole in the wall.I gathered my breath and quickly put up my helmet.
"who're you?!" I shouted angrily at the figure.I looked down to see Mira was unconscious.I bent down and put her arm around her shoulders."Mira,"i jiggled her a bit."mira."
"It's worthless to try she'll be unconscious for a while."the figure said smug.I wanted to punch him in the face."and to answer your question I'm kkz123.the newest cyborg for zurgs army."
"some how I know this guy." i thought to myself.
"now be a good little girl, put down the ranger and come with me." I gasped.
"no! nooooooooooooo! how is this possible? oh god, Kerri, Alana! are they still alive? and what about 42?"I was shouting at myself in head. "Samantha You've really done it this time!What am i gonna do?!!!!!!!!!!" basically i was freaking out. I grabbed Mira's legs and i started to run.
" hey where do you think your heading?!" he shouted angrily after us.I ducked into my room and laid Mira on my bed.I locked the door.
"what do I do?!"i said quietly."cmon sam you've been in tighter spots than this."
flashback -------------------------------------- "Samantha we are hereby disowning you. take your things and leave the property Immediately."my father said.
"I knew they would do it one day.but now?" i thought angrily. "well If you hate me so much why was I even born!"I shouted at them.
"why Samantha, why did you turn out like this?"my mother said quietly."didn't you ever think of your father or my reputation.Why couldn't you be more like your brother?"I couldn't stand it anymore.
"what do you want me to be like?! Some perfect jerk who's never there?!" I grabbed my stuff and stormed out.
I couldn't believe it.my own family just deserted me. "you know what?! FINE! I don't need them I don't need anyo..." I was perfectly minding my own business when I saw a bunch of jerks harassing a girl about a few years younger than me.I walked up to them.I wasn't thinking straight.
one of them looked at me then sneered."looks like we got ourselves another easy catc."he would've finished that word if I hadn't punched him square in the face and it sent him flying. the other guys looked at me then picked up their friend and ran the hell off.I looked at the girl for a minute then turned and started to walk off when she came up to me unexpectedly and grabbed my arm.
"Oh thank you soo much! I thought I was a goner! I'm Kerri by the way, what's your name?"I snatched my arm back and stared to walk off.
"no one of any consequence." she ran up to me and grabbed my arm again."what's with this chick?"I thought to myself.
"please at least come eat dinner with me and my mother! we love company! Please!"I shook her off again and shouted.
"Do I have to spell It out for you! I'm a freakin Delinquent! No one wants me! I'm alone!"I started to gather my breath again. she just looked at me and smiled.
"you're not a no one to me.you did something to make yourself noticed.you saved me and told me your feelings."she stuck her hand out to me."please come and you can be in our family." I stared at the hand and just brushed it away.
"you don't want someone like me in your family." I started to walk again when I heard a different voice.
"Kerri!"I turned around."are on your way home from school?"
"Oh that's my mom!"she shouted happily.the mother ran toward this Kerri girl and glomped her.(glomp=attack hug)
"huh who's this?"the mother looked at me.
"she saved my life." Kerri said happily.
"I did no such thing!" I shouted angrily.
"please come eat with us."the mother said.I know now where she gets it.I sighed.
"alright I give." They dragged me to their house and made me eat with them and told me stories.and i. .i didn't feel alone anymore. ----------------------------------------------- end chap 6. man rough past sam. I feel for you. plz reply!
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Post by Tonetone1224 on Apr 24, 2009 15:15:22 GMT -5
I love it. It is so cute how Kerri is asking her to come eat dinner with them
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Post by xrsmechainic15 on Apr 24, 2009 16:17:01 GMT -5
thanks
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Post by xrsmechainic15 on Apr 26, 2009 15:46:21 GMT -5
Chap7 flashback part 2 ---------------------------------------------- Ever since then kerri and alana(oh that's kerri's mom) accepted me into their family, and I started to go back to school. so then I could hang out with kerri more and that's when I first saw it.
"KERRI! OMG! Did you see any metal look like that all neat and shiny!"I squeled.kerri looked at me funny.we were on our way from school and I stopped in front of a mechainic's store.
"um, sammy(her and alana's nickname for me) if you like metal so much,maybe you should join the metal mechainics class."I looked at her.
"there's such a class?"I said scarily.she shuddered.
"yeah, i'll come check it out with you if you want."she said shyly.
"nah, i'll go myself, plus you and your mom both have to work tonight."I hated the thought she had to go to work and got to school,there wasn't enough time for both."hey and i'll make sure to make a big dinner for all of us."I said smiling.
"ok see you sammy."and she ran off. Later -------- "man, it's so late." i said to myself while walking down a dark alley with groceries.
"hey,samantha harned."I looked over to where to the voice came from.(an harned is sam's last name)
"gasp!" it was my old delinquent gang! everyone of them! I started to inch away.
"you think you can just go straight and leave the gang and we'll say oh really ok! now enough of your bull crap!(an sorry for the recent cussing, but their delinquents, you can't expect them to be all howdy do and stuff.)I.I wanted to run, but i also wanted to change. I was being beaten.all the groceries were splattered all over the place.I couldn't move my arm. one pulled out a large knife. and like that my left arm was gone.I started to loose conciousness while this I heard a voice.
"SAM!WHAT DO PPL THINK YOU'RE DOING?!" the gang ran off.the voice it was...alana? and i lost conscoiusness. three weeks later....
i opened my eyes.everything was blurry at first I tried to move my left arm to put on my forehead to shield my eyes but noting happened.I looked down at my non existent arm and screamed. which woke a sleeping kerri in a chair next to my bed.
"Ahh what's happening?! what's going on?!" kerri yelled as she jumped from her chair.she looked down at me."oh sammy. yeah your arm. mom found you.Why didn't you run samatha?!" she cried.
"i had to.to make sure they knew i was gone from being a delinquent to...being someone else." I looked down from her. my bangs covering my face. it's something i've done since I was little.I knew she wouldn't understand.she just looked at me and nodded her head.
a person walked in.by her outfit i guessed she was a doctor and this is a hospital."well ms.harned your arm can be replaced by robotics,but will be painful.do you think you can endure it? and we'll also include a switchout shoulder mechainism which allows you to take out and replace it. before we build it though we'll need your approval."
"there's no need."I said."because I'll BUILD IT MYSELF! all i need is a shoulder thingy. please."
kerri's thought."she called it a thingy."
"right......." the doctor said."i'll get started on that as soon as I can."
I went to all the mechainics classes throughout high school. during this time i just used a simple robotic arm the hospital supplied. but that's all i needed.alana and kerri came up with useful ideas for the arm and hands. during high school i also went to anatomy classes which helped me understand normal figures inside and out of the regular creature's body.once i graduated ppl started to pick fights with me again and this time i wasn't afraid for me but for kerri and alana and now daniel. he had changed his ways and wanted to be closer than ever. so like that i ran away, from the only family that accepted me to protect them.That's how much I loved them. I changed my appearance and moved in to a desert town and got a job as a mechainic for a while at bigs. that's when i met 42. she was just in the middle of the desert and i picked her up and fixed her, and just like kerri she wanted to be friends. ----------------------------------------------------------- present "man what do i do?!" i was starting to freak out. some guy banging on my door. and mira unconscious on my bed.
"just come out of there and i won't hurt you!" the guy said.
"NoWAY!" i said angerily.mira stirred then sat up.
"sam what's going on?" she asked while holding her head. she must've hit it when she got blown up.
"oh nothing of importance except ...WE'RE BEING ATTACKED!" I quickly got infront of the door."here you go find booster and i'll distract this guy!"she nodded and slid thru the floor. I opened the door rammed into the guy who wasn't expecting it and he fell.I ran as fast as I could and yelled."NYAH!can't catch me!" ----------------------------------------------------------------------------- end chap7
holy crap that was super long! i needz a break. plz reply soon. bye bye.
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