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Post by Tonetone1224 on May 18, 2009 20:18:05 GMT -5
Well now I do
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Post by xrsmechainic15 on May 18, 2009 20:30:54 GMT -5
i lov dem!
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Post by Tonetone1224 on May 18, 2009 20:34:17 GMT -5
ME TOO. I also love your karoke part in the story
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Post by xrsmechainic15 on May 18, 2009 20:36:53 GMT -5
thank you!
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Post by xrsmechainic15 on May 23, 2009 16:56:06 GMT -5
chap 15(a/n i love karaoke!sam:i don't know why you're making me sing.me:SHUT UP! ----------------------------------------------------------------- Sam's pov i was walking with xr....well technically i was walking faster than him and he was trying to catch up.i kept going until i heard a familiar voice that made my skin crawl. "Samantha harned." i turned around.
"lieutenant fisher."i glared at him angrily.
"actually it's general now, no thanks to you." xr was looking back and forth between us. he looked down at xr."still playing with robots i see."
i pushed xr behind me. "this one you're not allowed to destroy."I'll never forgive him for what he did.
he put his hand on my shoulder and i violently shook it off. "oh Samantha are you still upset about that robotic monster you created long ago?he was a danger to society."
"YOU KNOW VERY WELL HE WAS NOT DANGEROUS! AND HE WASN'T A MONSTER!HE WAS ONE OF MY BEST FRIENDS! IF ANYONE IS A MONSTER IT'S YOU!"
"Samantha, you haven't aged a bit. still quick to anger and violence.it's been ten years hasn't it?since you made a robot?"
inside xr's mind "Sam made a robot?!"
"YOU HAD NO RIGHT TO DESTROY HIM!"
"I HAD EVERY RIGHT HE WAS A MONSTER LIKE ALL ROBOTS! my hand clenched. he pointed at xr. "IS THIS YOUR NEW MONSTER DR.FRANKENSTEIN?" that did it. I ran toward him and punched him with my robotic arm.
"IF YOU THINK ROBOTS ARE MONSTERS THEN GET USED TO IT! CAUSE THEY'LL BE HERE TO STAY IF I HAVE ANYTHING TO SAY ABOUT IT!" i turned around and started to walk off toward our rooms. "come on xr."
"I'LL HAVE MY WAY HARNED YOU AND ALL YOUR FREAKY CREATIONS ARE GOING DOWN!"i heard him yell as we walked off.
"man i hate people like that." i was fuming mad.
xr'spov man, sam is sooo mad. I'd better keep in line if want to remain assembled.but I've got to go on with my plan! ------------------------------------------- end chap15
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Post by Tonetone1224 on May 23, 2009 21:21:10 GMT -5
I liked it. I hope you keep on writing your stories
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Post by xrsmechainic15 on May 27, 2009 11:02:31 GMT -5
chap16 --------------------------- sam's pov xr and i were walking to our rooms and away from that jerk. "sorry about that xr, he, he just doesn't understand.when i was little, i had noone. so i decided to make someone." xr looked at me funny.
"Were you a child prodigy?" i smiled.
"could be, never cared that much to find out.the robot i created...well i was just starting so i had to make him big...really big."
"how big?" i looked away.
"taller than the watertower in my hometown."
"WHAT?!"xr started to freak out.
"i had to make i got everything right." suddenly the ground began to shake. "xr! what's going on?" suddenly a beam of light came down and encircled us.
at zurgs palace---- daniel's pov
zurg being the idiot he is ran and hid behind his throne while the ground started to shake and a large light beam came outta nowhere.and it started to lift warp and i off the ground.
back with sam and xr.~~~~~~~~~~ sam's pov
the light began to lift me up off the ground. xr stayed on the ground. "SAM!"he used his rockets to grab onto my foot as i was transported to somewhere unknown.
"KRAK!"
i landed on the ground."Oh it's softer than i thought it would be."
"g-get off of me sam!"i got up real quick to realize i landed on xr.
"Oops." i looked around and spotted some familiar faces. "look xr! it's buzz, mira and booster!"
"great."
suddenly a great booming voice came out of the sky. "HEROES!VILLANS!WELCOME TO THE COLLOSIAM DE EXCELLANCE!HERE YOU WILL BATTLE THOSE I CHOOSE FOR YOU TO BATTLE!"
xr and i ran over to our friends."buzz! what's going on?"
"THOSE WHO ARE NOT FIGHTING MAY REST IN THEIR QUARTERS I HAVE ISSUED!THOSE WHO LOSE WILL BE DESTROYED!ANY ISSUES? NO? THEN LET'S BEGIN!" ------------------------------------------------- end chap 16
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Post by Tonetone1224 on May 27, 2009 21:24:43 GMT -5
Can't wait until the next chapter
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Post by xrsmechainic15 on May 27, 2009 21:29:58 GMT -5
thanks!
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Post by Tonetone1224 on May 27, 2009 21:31:43 GMT -5
Welcome. Unlike me, you actually keep on adding chapters, I keep on forgetting
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Post by xrsmechainic15 on May 27, 2009 21:34:43 GMT -5
the thing is my mind is like super fast with ideas that i have to get them down before i forgets them.
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Post by Tonetone1224 on May 27, 2009 21:36:07 GMT -5
That's a good plan. I just think of ideas, and if I remember them, I write them
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Post by xrsmechainic15 on Jun 2, 2009 17:17:53 GMT -5
chap17(i just realized they got rid of the xr emoticons.i liked them.they added pizazz.) ------------------------------------------------------------------------------- normal pov suddenly everyone disappeared except buzz and warp. the voice suddenly added one thing."WHOEVER WINS GETS ONE WISH AND IT GETS GRANTED NO MATTER WHAT THE REQUEST." buzz and warp looked at each other.
"well,warp,it seems we've been pitted against eachother....again.
"yeah,whatever.hey nice shorts by the way.*points at buzz's Bermuda shorts*
"yeah,well,....shut up."
"LET THE BATTLE BEGIN!"
buzz and warp fought at each other using everything,guns,hand to hand combat,etc.etc.(i'm not really that good with fight scenes.but I'll try)
warp and buzz used up all the guns and lasers and now were just beating on each other.warp falls to the ground and is unconscious.
"BUZZ LIGHT YEAR YOU ARE THE WINNER!WHAT IS UR WISH?
"i wish for warp dark matter not to be destroyed."
"WISH GRANTED!*warp disappears*I HAVE RETURNED HIM TO PLANET Z! YOU ARE THRU FOR NOW BUZZ LIGHT YEAR!"
buzz disappears. "AND NOW FOR A CHANGE I'VE DECIDED TO HAVE THE OTHER COMPETITORS WATCH THE FIGHTS!NOW!*stands appear and every one is in them except two people.* "EVERYONE WELCOME THE NEXT TWO COMPETITORS!kkz123 and booster!
Sam and xr looked at each other. "oh no.boosters gonna get destroyed!"
"don't worry Sam,he'll be fine.....i hope.
end chap17 -------------------------------------------------------------------------
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Post by Tonetone1224 on Jun 2, 2009 17:20:37 GMT -5
This is great! I love it
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Post by xrsmechainic15 on Jun 2, 2009 17:49:16 GMT -5
thanks!
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