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Post by Tonetone1224 on Mar 27, 2009 22:32:17 GMT -5
Name: Jana Age: 14 Gender: Female Species: Cyborg Home world: Trade World Ethnic Background: Italian (Though I doubt Italians are in BLoSC) Hair: Straight red hair Skin: White, but robotic parts have a grayish purple tint. Eyes: Left eye is a purple robotic eye. Right eye is blue Clothes: Normally wears cut up jeans, and a black shirt with a red rose. Profession: Mechanic Likes: Technology, people she can get along with, chocolate, roses, animals, purple, guns, and the occasional crimes Dislikes: People she doesn’t get along with, Rangers, being pushed around or told what to do Basics: In order to pay off a debt, she tries to steal from Warp. In her attempt to steal some things, she accidentally breaks some of Warps things. Before she can leave with what she stole, she is caught by Warp, who looks anything but happy. In order to pay off what she broke, she had to become Warps mechanic, and help him when he had orders from Zurg.
Yeah so, as you can see, it is an edited version WOO!
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Post by Warp Darkmatter on Mar 31, 2009 18:33:00 GMT -5
You have a very interesting character. I think she would be great in a roleplay. Have you ever thought about that? It's tons of fun.
I do like the fact that she can get along with Warp. Wouldn't want to be on the wrong end of her temper. Um, Just a little critique from someone who probably shouldn't say anything; her likes and dislikes seem to be a little incomplete, but maybe that's just me. My OC is probably like that a little too. Is she ever happy? What makes her happy and what are her pet peeves? Just curious.
Other than that, nice job.
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Post by Tonetone1224 on Mar 31, 2009 19:20:08 GMT -5
Thanks. Jana does get along with him but she and him get in fights. I am kind of making Warp act sort of like an older brother, like fighting over stupid things with Jana, but trying to act like a brother. ;D P.S. I will take critique from anyone who wants to.
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Post by Warp Darkmatter on Apr 5, 2009 19:40:02 GMT -5
Huh. That would be a new side of him. Sounds interesting.
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Post by invaderbecky on May 5, 2009 16:53:39 GMT -5
Jana sounds like a great oc
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Post by Tonetone1224 on May 5, 2009 16:56:28 GMT -5
thanks. I have a story with her in it on here. It's called A New Commer
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