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Post by Warp Darkmatter on Apr 7, 2009 13:28:09 GMT -5
Nice! That's probably just about the way it would go too. lol
And I would've commented on Chapter 3 @ FF.net but your "everybody" reviews are disabled.
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Post by Tonetone1224 on Apr 7, 2009 15:10:21 GMT -5
about that last part...Do you know how to change that
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Post by Warp Darkmatter on Apr 7, 2009 15:15:45 GMT -5
Nope...sry. I'm not on FF.net. Ask Skyfire.
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Post by Tonetone1224 on Apr 7, 2009 15:17:41 GMT -5
Thanks. I think I will
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Post by Warp Darkmatter on Apr 7, 2009 15:20:43 GMT -5
U R Welcome
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Post by Tonetone1224 on Apr 7, 2009 20:10:10 GMT -5
You can now review it.
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Post by Warp Darkmatter on Apr 7, 2009 20:23:03 GMT -5
Thank you.
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Post by Tonetone1224 on Apr 7, 2009 20:50:58 GMT -5
welcome
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saron
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Post by saron on Apr 7, 2009 21:01:44 GMT -5
I like how everything is purple.
And yes, Jana's a fiesty character isn't she? ;D
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Post by Tonetone1224 on Apr 7, 2009 21:11:23 GMT -5
yes she is. She has had a very troubled past which leads to that
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Post by Warp Darkmatter on Apr 7, 2009 21:11:55 GMT -5
oh very.
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Post by Tonetone1224 on Apr 7, 2009 21:21:30 GMT -5
It's funny because Jana is a character that I made my own story line to, but never found anywhere to put it. I have had her since I was 9. she started as a superhero who had no parents but dogs that had super powers too. then I made her robotic after watching the terminater or something and teen titans.
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Post by Tonetone1224 on Apr 7, 2009 21:25:12 GMT -5
then jeremy was created as a big villain who had a crush on Jana in childrens home and took things too far and got obsessed over Jana. Then a dog came into the picture and I made her robotic too. Then her dad, her sister, her dog, the Bad Guys. I just need to put bios of all the other important characters
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Post by Warp Darkmatter on Apr 7, 2009 21:45:28 GMT -5
Way to put a teaser in there.
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Post by Tonetone1224 on Apr 7, 2009 21:50:46 GMT -5
whats a teaser
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