Hope this is the right place...

[mslyoness]

...for a little poem. Er, technically song lyrics. (If not, I'll happily move it)

So yeah. I have this bad habit of writing lyrics about my favorite shows/manga/movies/whatever, and here, ladies and gentlemen, is a Wine-inspired piece. (Do I ever post anything non-Wine? XD)

I dance between the open doors
I feel like I’ve seen you before
I guess I don’t remember when,
But it’ll come to me again
Shining glass and blueish flames
It will never be the same
Give me all you have to give,
A simple smile can make me live

Mark my words you’re lovely
My beauty, you’re above me
There’s a sadness in your voice
And I don’t have a choice,
Choice,
Choice
I think I’m going down
When there’s no one else around
You can’t pretend it’s nothing
Cuz I see your eyes widen,
I see your eyes widen when you look at me
When you look at me,
When you look at me
So just look at me

I’ve stumbled upon something new
But don’t know what I’m supposed to do
When everybody wears a mask,
Honesty’s too much to ask
Painful scars and burning skin
I’ve come too far not to win
Losing’s not an option here,
And loss is what I really fear

Mark my words you’re lovely
My beauty, you’re above me
There’s a sadness in your voice
And I don’t have a choice,
Choice,
Choice
I think I’m going down
When there’s no one else around
You can’t pretend it’s nothing
Cuz I see your eyes widen,
I see your eyes widen when you look at me,
When you look at me,
When you look at me
So just look at me!

...Yup. I may at some point use this in a fic, or maybe not. Anyway, it has no title. Anybody have an idea? (*is not good at naming things*)

[Skyfire]

Oh wow, this is good! I can't write songs without writing them to a pre-existing song to save my life.

Yes, this is the right place. *nods*

Would you mind if I quoted this song sometime in my fics? Like this verse:

I’ve stumbled upon something new
But don’t know what I’m supposed to do
When everybody wears a mask,
Honesty’s too much to ask
Painful scars and burning skin
I’ve come too far not to win
Losing’s not an option here,
And loss is what I really fear

...Especially the second half, is really so very Anakin Skywalker. I'd love to be able to quote that in the SW fic I'm doing right now.
Y'know, "Just Look at Me" sounds like a fair title! ;D

[mslyoness]

Why of COURSE you can use this! I'm flattered.

Okay, "Just Look At Me" it is!