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Post by Alohilani on Apr 28, 2007 21:30:56 GMT -5
You know, there are some mistakes, but if you want to PM the chapters to me before you post them, I could look them over and edit the mistakes out for you.
Other than that...
FOR TEH WIIIIN.
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Breta
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One too many drained robots.
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Post by Breta on Apr 28, 2007 21:43:37 GMT -5
That was rather entertaining.
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Breta
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One too many drained robots.
Posts: 64
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Post by Breta on Apr 28, 2007 22:56:48 GMT -5
That was rather entertaining. Aw thank you <3 You're welcome.
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Post by livielightyear on May 3, 2007 21:05:10 GMT -5
NEXT CHAPTER! =D
That was a really good read. I loved how you wrote XR x3
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Post by livielightyear on May 17, 2007 15:35:56 GMT -5
SUSPENCE!! D=
x3 love it so faaaarr...
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Post by levy120 on May 23, 2007 12:56:17 GMT -5
Woot, I like the last part very much :3 I'ts making progress... and it's doing that very fast... x3 And... it could be just me... but I think this was the most entertaining part yet :3
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Post by levy120 on May 30, 2007 7:05:19 GMT -5
I know this feeling... :3 I'd like to comment it a little more extensive, if you want me to ^^ Means asking questions and stuff... xD
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Post by levy120 on Jun 12, 2007 13:42:00 GMT -5
I need a break... xD I can't concentrate anymore again... but still I want to post what I got til yet :3 C1 Zurg is dah rul0r! *cough* Agent Z *cough* That must be a sound, only a machine could make… I tried it! x3 I like this whole part It's sweet and... strange the same time xD I know it’s insignificant, but what was he doing anyway? xD Animaniacs \o/ And such a fitting quote here xD Buahahaha ...did I laugh loudly? Gee, I would kill him xD nicknames and I like that one x3 Uh… jealousy x3 <3 x3 (way, my comments are becoming useful *cough*) Always an evil plan on the back of the head… @@ (Though... Zurg doesn't seem to learn... I remember this cutey Epi... x3) Mistakes: I guess it’s businesslike? Commander :3 I guess here’s an “of” missing…? C2 That sounds so... yeah... x3 So she can sweat… but she can’t stand water, right… so what exactly is she sweating? (I'm starting to think too complicated again... after all this is a cartoony-fanfic... ^^°) ATTENTION! xD <3 Innocence <3 This one is so hilarious x3 Although I don’t know what “to make out” is, I like this xD Poor XR Though I must admit, I wouldn’t like to be hit on by him too xx” Women… x3 xD Always fun to see x3 Though I think such things shouldn’t be in a serious fanfiction… aw, never mind ^^ Lovely running gag x3 D:/ (<- hand xD) ... ... ... I use to much smileys xD nice... description… (first time I use one of these great smileys!)What a question x3 Great reaction… I wonder what he’s thinking right now… x3 Yay, that's it... for the first 2 chapters... I'm not making a fazit now, because I know how it's going on and so... I hope this quoting is okay and stuff... :3
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Post by Alohilani on Jun 12, 2007 18:02:24 GMT -5
...yeah, I'm beta-ing, so any grammar/spelling errors are my fault. XD; I must not have caught those.
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Post by eez on Jun 12, 2007 18:05:06 GMT -5
Lucky space...having a beta-er. I have to post it, read it on site, then correct. Tis a meticulous process...and I miss some of my mistakes until I read it like the fifth time or something XD
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Post by levy120 on Jun 12, 2007 23:59:25 GMT -5
So... I guess amongst others that the TV-thing was from Kila... I dunno why... somehow fits her style ^^ But I could also be wrong... xD Lucky space...having a beta-er. I have to post it, read it on site, then correct. Tis a meticulous process...and I miss some of my mistakes until I read it like the fifth time or something XD I'm reading them just one time before posting... and correct them in another Doc called "Titel of the fanfic Vol2" and your're gonna laugh about my desktop there are... files... called "k3 vol3.4.2.doc" ^^° Mistakes are nothing bad... everyone makes mistakes... xx" We're learning from them and that's a good thing also... I make tons of mistakes and don't even recognise them, so... xD And eh... I lost the plot oo"
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Post by aerinsol on Jul 2, 2007 12:22:52 GMT -5
yay! Chapter 5's finally here! *hugs Spaceisnear then starts reading*
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Post by eez on Jul 2, 2007 19:56:08 GMT -5
D: It's a sad story so far! Zurg, that scumbag! You make me want to give him a lazy horn! *cracks knuckles*
Please say Jamie is alright! She doesn't deserve to die! DX
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Post by eez on Jul 4, 2007 2:21:39 GMT -5
Good! I don't want Jamie to die...sad stories make me leak from the eyes
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