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Post by Alohilani on Jun 27, 2007 21:22:50 GMT -5
www.fanfiction.net/s/3621460/1/YAY FO' MEEE. There's only one there so far and it's angsty. :[ but I have some really cute L&S ones, if you check my profile.
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Post by eez on Jun 27, 2007 21:40:20 GMT -5
I congratulate you! I could never do such a thing.....I'd fry my neurons! What little I have left D:
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Post by levy120 on Jun 28, 2007 10:54:54 GMT -5
Finally... a Carrie one (on dA), I've been waiting for it :3 The beginning was kinda... familiar for me. Self-isolated, huh? (Glad that changed xx") One thing I liked about her is that she seems to be able to counter x3 I dunno, I like this character trait... :3 Regarding her size that's quite an attitude ^^
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Post by Alohilani on Jun 28, 2007 11:25:54 GMT -5
Thank you. <3
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Post by BandGeek727 on Jun 28, 2007 21:03:21 GMT -5
Aw, that first one made me wanna cry... Poor XR...
Beautifully written, Kila. So simple, so chilling. I love how the end ties in with the beginning.
Yay, you've taken on the 100 Challenge! I like what I've read so far! Lookin' forward to see what you do with it!
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Post by Alohilani on Jun 30, 2007 19:25:18 GMT -5
Update'age.
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Post by Alohilani on Jun 30, 2007 21:11:46 GMT -5
...and more update'age
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Post by BandGeek727 on Jul 2, 2007 14:37:27 GMT -5
Aw, chapter 3 was sad! Poor, lonely XR... Awesome word choice. Chapter 4 was interesting. The way you write Carrie... her personality does seem compatible with XR. I guess I just don't understand what attracts them to each other. Although, judging by the end of the story, neither did XR... They are cute together.
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Post by Alohilani on Jul 2, 2007 14:49:44 GMT -5
Well, Carrie is attracted to him partly becasue she's been surrounded by these horrible idiots all her life and he's something new. As for XR... being as needy as he is, I think he could warm up to pretty much anyone. As long as they were compatible and nice to him.
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Post by BandGeek727 on Jul 2, 2007 14:56:13 GMT -5
Ah, okay. I see. Carrie finds XR exciting; makes sense. Thanks for clearing that up!
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Post by aerinsol on Jul 2, 2007 18:33:45 GMT -5
Well, Carrie is attracted to him partly becasue she's been surrounded by these horrible idiots all her life and he's something new. I can understand the new part, but honestly, when is XR not acting like an idiot? but then again... he does have his shining moments...
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Post by Alohilani on Jul 2, 2007 19:11:15 GMT -5
...Is there ever a reason to be attracted to someone, though? o-o; In the story they're supposed to have been friends for a while...
and I added a new one, btw
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Post by BandGeek727 on Jul 2, 2007 22:04:50 GMT -5
Wow Kila, you rock. I wish I could finish stories as quickly as you! And wow, amazing new story. It's a different kind of perspective on the pain XR goes through. I love how you describe XR's memory of NOS's control over him. It makes sense how he would remember it, and hate it. Poor XR... he needs someone who understands him. Another great installment!
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Post by Alohilani on Jul 2, 2007 22:05:58 GMT -5
Thank you! n_n
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Post by BandGeek727 on Jul 2, 2007 22:16:48 GMT -5
You're very welcome!
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