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Post by Saturn on Aug 18, 2007 0:09:55 GMT -5
Bwah. xDDD You's gots NOS, Warp, and Zurg all in character. >D I luffs you. -hug-
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Post by overcast on Aug 18, 2007 0:11:19 GMT -5
Uh... thank you? I hope you liked the story. What do you think of DG?
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Post by Saturn on Aug 18, 2007 0:14:26 GMT -5
I did! DGs' kinda coool... The whole 'master theif' title reminds me of Sly Cooper. xD -has played and beaten all three- She needs something she always carries around! Oh wait....those would be plasma guns or something... -shuts up-
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Post by overcast on Aug 18, 2007 0:16:45 GMT -5
Well she always has her hat...? Would that count? Oh! And her mask and her whole 'secret identity' thing. Whatever happened to villians and having secret identities?
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Post by overcast on Sept 15, 2007 14:50:32 GMT -5
I know! What ever happened to villians secret identities? Man, thats probably the longest comment I've gotten on this thing! Thanks! I'm glad you like it! I aim to please! I'm probably going to have Worry and Q-T up and about next chapter. Thanks for reading and staying tuned!
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Post by ab103 on Sept 15, 2007 14:51:29 GMT -5
YAY WORRY!
And sorry about the useless comment.
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Post by overcast on Sept 15, 2007 14:56:40 GMT -5
Tis alright, my friend. Now if I can only make time to write it...
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Post by eez on Sept 15, 2007 15:05:34 GMT -5
I like Q-T the best! She's Qute! XDDDDDD *ahem* Couldn't resist....my villain had a secret identity. How come villains can never keep it?! They have such loose lips. And I can't find time to write either....well besides now, but I'm spending it here, so NYAH XP
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Post by overcast on Aug 4, 2008 16:09:16 GMT -5
A Different Point Of View Chapter One
Zurg paced around his throne. He was all alone. For the moment. Who knew when one of his minions would walk in, complaining about safety hazards or some such nonsense. He needed a plan to get rid of Lightyear. But what? He had tried everything! Turning everyone into him, he had brought one of their malfunctioning robots back online, he had hired several to get rid of him, had made a shape stealer, and an energy vampire… Wait! Energy vampire. NOS-4-A2! Had it not been for XL he would have won! That’s the closest anyone had ever gotten, besides himself, to beating Lightyear! He had done most of the work on the bot himself! He was insured to be evil! And he was to go against his creator. Zurg frowned. He had to rethink this a bit… Nos had been blown to smithereenees! And who knew where he was at all! Hold on… Tracking device! He remembered installing one just incase he got lost or something like that. He wasn’t really sure why he had in the first place, but it seemed at good idea at the time…He strolled back over to his throne and sat down and pushed a button on the arm of the thing. “Grubs!” He bellowed into the mike. He heard several of the insectoids get startled but this sudden noise. Zurg had to grin, he loved spooking the Grubs. It was way up there with using the Wedgey Ray on Warp when he skipped out on his job for a party! Good times… “Is the tracking beacon for NOS-4-A2 still working! And if it’s not its coming out of your pay… and flesh!” He said. There was the sound of scrambling to get the information their master required.
“Yes, oh Evil One!” A shaky, Grub said over the other mike. “It is!” Zurg grinned.
“Good, it saved your grubby little antenna’s…” He said. “Now, I want some of you to go out there and bring me back as many parts of Nossy as you can. Including the head. We need that.” Zurg said. “And be back by dinner, you know how chef is.” He said. There was of chorus of various titles. “You bet it, bug eyes!” He said with a grin. “Now, get going!” He then pushed the button again. “Get me a Brain Pod in here! Stat!” He yelled into the poor mike once more. Soon a pod rolled into the throne room and looked up at the evil purple man.
“Yes my evil emperor?” He asked. Zurg looked down at the brain, as though it was obvious. Though this is just in Zurgs mind, tis a dark, dank, and mostly empty place to be. And one wouldn’t want to be anyway.
“I want to talk to you about keeping a certain robot in check once he’s put back together….”
“I might have something in mind, my evil emperor.” The pod said. Zurg smiled and leaned back in his throne.
“Good… Now out with it.” He said.
XR peeked around the corner and looked around, narrowing his goggle like eyes in a suspicious manner. “The cost is clear.” He whispered as he moved out from behind the corner. Mira came out after him, a slightly annoyed look on her face.
“XR, why are we sneaking around Star Command?” She asked as she put her hands on her hips. XR turned around, arms spread out in a welcoming gesture.
“Oh, no reason.”
“The commander is upset with you again, isn’t he?” Mira asked with a smirk. XR scowled and crossed his arms over his chest. Mira knew she was right. The commander was always mad at XR for something. Always. Almost said, really, how much XR wanted to be close to his ‘father’. Yet he wanted little if nothing to do with him. In fact, that was really said. Especially when XR kept on trying to get on his dads good side, yet always being the brunt of his rage. She and XR continued to their destination in an awkward silence. They were going to meet someone that they were supposed to take on a routine patrol. Who it was and what they were like was beyond their knowledge. And they were late. Again. They had been like that for several days, or perhaps it was weeks, now. Ever since the incident with 42 they hadn’t gotten along that well. Sure they normally had they’re issues, but it was never as bad as it was now.
“You don’t think we’ll get stuck with an old grouch, do ya?” The robot asked the Tangean. Mira shrugged.
“I don’t see why we’d be taking an old grouch around the galaxy for.” She pointed out. XR stuck his tongue out at her and blew a raspberry at her. The princess rolled her eyes; he could be so childish sometimes. They came into the room and saluted the commander.
“At ease, rangers.” The older man said. “Now, we have an… eccentric guest, we ask that you respect her. Understood?” He asked.
“Yes commander, sir!” They said in unison. Eccentric? How eccentric was that? They soon found out. A humanoid cat walked up to them, clothed in all black. She had black stripes on brown fur. She kneeled down and poked the dome that housed XR’s head in mild curiosity.
“Hey, hey, hey! Watch the merchandise!” XR said as he tried to wave her hand away.
“How does you head float like that? Nothings keeping it up…” She said, she sounded young, perhaps early to mid teens. Though she had as many curves as a pole. The cat continued to poke the robot.
“Personally I don’t know, I haven’t asked, now cut it out!” XR said. She stopped and tilted her head to the side.
“Rangers, this is Ruby. She’s going to report to her superior on the status of the galaxy.” Commander Nebula said. The cat now identified as Ruby nodded. Mira and XR looked at each other. So far the kid didn’t seem… Well, she didn’t appear to be the brightest bulb there was. But they decided to stay silent on this, or else invoke the commander’s wrath. She was to busy looking around to pay any attention to what they were saying.
“This place is nothing like the temple…” She said. “Oh! A button! What’s it do?” She asked.
“Don’t touch that!” Nebula yelled at the cat. She covered her large ears and cowered slightly.
“You’re almost as bad as master Orm when he’s mad.” She said.
“Almost?”
“He believes in corporal punishment.” The cat explained.
“Well… Don’t just stand there! GET TO IT!” Nebula yelled in his ever impatient manner. They all, including Ruby, saluted in a jittery manner and ran out of the room quickly.
Buzz tapped the arm of his chair. Mira and XR should have been there by now with their guest. “Where in Cosmos’ name are they?” He asked, hitting the arm of his chair with his fist in impatience. Booster cringed; he didn’t like it when his hero was upset with his friends.
“May-Maybe they got held up… Yeah! They just got held up. I’m sure they’ll be here soon, Buzz!” Booster insured his superior. Buzz merely nodded. Maybe there was a spy holding them up... a spy from Zurg… The door whooshed open the three walked in. The two rangers took they’re appropriate seats while Ruby just stood inbetween Booster and XR, looking every which way in curiosity. Buzz raised a brow at the girl.
“Um, Buzz. This is Ruby. Ruby, this is our captain, Buzz Lightyear” Mira said to break the awkward silence. Buzz just continued to look at the girl in a suspicious manner.
“Really… How old are you and who ordered you to this mission?” He asked. Mira sighed and held her head. Her superior could be so paranoid sometimes. Everything that was unfamiliar had to have something to do with Zurg. The cat looked at Buzz, not sensing the hostility, and smiled.
“I’m fifteen. And master Embar wanted me to do this. He said he was getting to old to do this.” She answered. Mira raised a brow. She seemed innocent enough, no reason to wonder if she was secretly working for Zurg, like she was sure he was at the moment. He always did. Like that incident with Zurg’s pen… Buzz thought it over and decided it was a truthful answer.
“Alright, you may want to sit down or hold onto something because we’ll be lifting off soon.” The captain said. Ruby nodded and sat down where she was. Booster was oogling over her.
“Aw! She’s so cute!” He said as he pet her head.
“I get that sometimes.” The cat said with a smile.
“Blast off!”
Zurg looked over the parts on the table. A torso, an arm, broken monocle, and head. The head, besides losing its eyes, was in almost perfect condition. He opened up the forehead and checked on the hardware. “Hm… His mind seems to be fully intact. Good. Brain pods! I want you to rebuild Nossy! And perhaps give him a bit more purple while you’re at it… And install this,” He said as he took out a small micro chip and handed it to a brain. “In his head. I want him as good as new! Even better if you can! Do it better and you get a Cake Day next Friday~.” Zurg said the last part in a sing song voice. The pods and Grubs nodded and started on the work.
“Aren’t you leaving, oh Evil One?” A brain pod asked. Zurg shook his head. “No, you’ll actually get a bit more help.” He said as he picked up the energy vampires head and looked at it. His favorite creation… And technically… His son. “Get me a new monocle, stat!”
“Yes my evil emperor!”
“You bet your neurons!”
I've decided to restart on the thing. I think I like this chapter better then the other one.
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