Post by RocketMeowth on Aug 30, 2007 14:04:42 GMT -5
I've been getting nothing but this idea ever since I thought of its title. It will star my two BLoSC characters, Chevron and his sister Kesher.
There is no plot in the overall story, but in its parts. Each part tells of a different event that Chevron and Kesher are put into and what they have to do to get out of it.
There will be planets, species, and other characters made up by me. I'll also use real characters cause I can. XD
Anyways, here is the section list for Part 1 (section = chapter). I hope you enjoy my story:
~Part 1 ::Garr::~
Section 1 ::Cold::
Section 2 ::Redeem::
Section 3 ::Interigations::
Section 4 ::Murder::
Section 5 ::Inferior::
Section 6 ::Negotiation::
Section 7 ::Armory::
Section 8 ::Lost::
= Prison Hold-9
6:53 a.m. =[/B]
*BOOM*
“RED ALERT! RED ALERT! PRISONER NUMBER 4-4-7-6-9-7-2 HAS ESCAPED! ALL PERSONEL REPORT TO YOUR SHIPS IMMEDIATELY! PRISONER NUMBER 4-4-7-6-9-7-2 HAS ESCAPED!”
The hallways of PH-9 were shrouded in flashing red light as a blaring siren was hardly muted by a robotic voice. The pounding steps of the personnel echoed throughout the granite colored hallways making it sound more like a stampede.
Many different voices could also be heard. Their words mixing together to create a sound kinda like loud muttering. Mixed in with the voices of the stampeding personnel were the many cheers and boos of the other prisoners.
“Garr you worthless… get back here and take me with you!”
“Way ta go Garr!!”
“Give’em a run for their money Garr!”
The many cheers and boos made Holding Chamber C4 sound more like a football stadium on Sunday night. The prisoners all clung to their cell bars, reaching out as far as they could for reasons they themselves didn’t understand.
Over in the launch bay, engines could be heard starting up from every ship. The roof opened up, making room for up to seven ships to launch with no problems. Smoke covered the floor like fog as the ships all launched one after another. They rocketed through the yellow sky, stabbing the blood red colored clouds as they continued into space. Once in space the pilots and their crews all witnessed the same confusing sight.
Not too far ahead of the now slow moving ships was another of their one man rockets. They all knew that the tiny ships pilot was Garr. What they didn’t know, or quit understand, was why Garr was just sitting in a fixed spot. Why wasn’t he trying to get away? They then heard a voice talk to them through their intercoms.
“What’s big, round, makes lots of noise, and lights up even space?” The voices pitch was deep and covered with a kind of chuckle that only the insane were able to muster out. The personnel glanced at whoever was sitting next to them in their ship, a confused look on their faces. “I’ll give you a hint,” spoke the voice again.
A Z-Class Shield covered the ship Garr was in. Once fully covered, Garr pushed down a single blue button that he was clutching. Within a matter a mere seconds, a chain reaction was set off on PH-9. The reaction was so immense, so huge, and so powerful, that the end result was devastating. PH-9… exploded. Each ship that was close to the planet, aside from Garr, was caught in the explosion and was destroyed.
“It’s you,” laughed Garr as his Z-Class Shield protected him. PH-9, as well as all life that was on it, was gone. Garr burst out into laughter as he flew off in his ship. He was once again free. And just as it was eight years ago, no location that Garr went to would know anything… but fear.
There is no plot in the overall story, but in its parts. Each part tells of a different event that Chevron and Kesher are put into and what they have to do to get out of it.
There will be planets, species, and other characters made up by me. I'll also use real characters cause I can. XD
Anyways, here is the section list for Part 1 (section = chapter). I hope you enjoy my story:
~Part 1 ::Garr::~
Section 1 ::Cold::
Section 2 ::Redeem::
Section 3 ::Interigations::
Section 4 ::Murder::
Section 5 ::Inferior::
Section 6 ::Negotiation::
Section 7 ::Armory::
Section 8 ::Lost::
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
RISK
~Part 1 ::Garr::~
prologue
RISK
~Part 1 ::Garr::~
prologue
= Prison Hold-9
6:53 a.m. =[/B]
*BOOM*
“RED ALERT! RED ALERT! PRISONER NUMBER 4-4-7-6-9-7-2 HAS ESCAPED! ALL PERSONEL REPORT TO YOUR SHIPS IMMEDIATELY! PRISONER NUMBER 4-4-7-6-9-7-2 HAS ESCAPED!”
The hallways of PH-9 were shrouded in flashing red light as a blaring siren was hardly muted by a robotic voice. The pounding steps of the personnel echoed throughout the granite colored hallways making it sound more like a stampede.
Many different voices could also be heard. Their words mixing together to create a sound kinda like loud muttering. Mixed in with the voices of the stampeding personnel were the many cheers and boos of the other prisoners.
“Garr you worthless… get back here and take me with you!”
“Way ta go Garr!!”
“Give’em a run for their money Garr!”
The many cheers and boos made Holding Chamber C4 sound more like a football stadium on Sunday night. The prisoners all clung to their cell bars, reaching out as far as they could for reasons they themselves didn’t understand.
Over in the launch bay, engines could be heard starting up from every ship. The roof opened up, making room for up to seven ships to launch with no problems. Smoke covered the floor like fog as the ships all launched one after another. They rocketed through the yellow sky, stabbing the blood red colored clouds as they continued into space. Once in space the pilots and their crews all witnessed the same confusing sight.
Not too far ahead of the now slow moving ships was another of their one man rockets. They all knew that the tiny ships pilot was Garr. What they didn’t know, or quit understand, was why Garr was just sitting in a fixed spot. Why wasn’t he trying to get away? They then heard a voice talk to them through their intercoms.
“What’s big, round, makes lots of noise, and lights up even space?” The voices pitch was deep and covered with a kind of chuckle that only the insane were able to muster out. The personnel glanced at whoever was sitting next to them in their ship, a confused look on their faces. “I’ll give you a hint,” spoke the voice again.
A Z-Class Shield covered the ship Garr was in. Once fully covered, Garr pushed down a single blue button that he was clutching. Within a matter a mere seconds, a chain reaction was set off on PH-9. The reaction was so immense, so huge, and so powerful, that the end result was devastating. PH-9… exploded. Each ship that was close to the planet, aside from Garr, was caught in the explosion and was destroyed.
“It’s you,” laughed Garr as his Z-Class Shield protected him. PH-9, as well as all life that was on it, was gone. Garr burst out into laughter as he flew off in his ship. He was once again free. And just as it was eight years ago, no location that Garr went to would know anything… but fear.
