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Post by levy120 on Oct 29, 2007 16:06:27 GMT -5
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Post by levy120 on Mar 23, 2008 15:46:39 GMT -5
levy120.deviantart.com/art/BLoSC-Rayman-CO-Part-2-80808150okay update... I have to say... this part is bigger then the last one and... I struggled long with it, so I wanted to finish that one fast now... I build a little bridge and yep... if there are any plotholes just tell me... (as well as mistakes in spelling and grammar) ...actually I didn't want this to happen, but the story wrote itself again and BLAH... yeah... xx" comments and feedback really appreciated and I'm STILL open for critique... xD I hope I didn't do too much mistakes with the whole engines part... xx"
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Post by levy120 on Apr 19, 2008 3:18:20 GMT -5
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Post by Eclipse'd on Apr 19, 2008 10:04:10 GMT -5
Wow, this is really good and I love it. To be honest I've never even heard of Rayman before, but the description of the limbless creatures and drawings look familiar. ^.^ I can't wait for the next chapter.
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Post by levy120 on Apr 19, 2008 12:00:31 GMT -5
Wow, this is really good and I love it. THANK YOU xD You're like... the second one to read this xD Rayman is that limbless video-game hero of Ubisoft... ^^ Maybe you should google for some pictures of him, he's cute :3 (at least he was in the second game which I preffer... in the third one they wanted to make him look "cool") Finally two readers to motivate me... now we're getting somewhere ^^
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Post by Eclipse'd on Apr 19, 2008 12:25:46 GMT -5
You also get extra bonus points for sticking Warp in the story. ^^ My poor selfish mechanical-armed greedy jerk is so unloved. ;D
And thanks again and again for the episodes, I'm working on Star Crossed right now.
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