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Post by Alohilani on Jun 15, 2008 23:10:28 GMT -5
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ckret2
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I'm glad that we are different, we've better things to do.
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Post by ckret2 on Jun 15, 2008 23:34:32 GMT -5
*waves* You already know how I feel about City Traffic Puzzle. XD
I heartily recommend this fic to anyone and everyone. It's got perfect characterization, awesome plot, and some great humor and dialogue. Plus, it has XR. What more could you ask for?
I don't know whether or not anyone would scroll down to see the replies before clicking the link to the fic, but if they do, well, here's my two cents.
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Post by Alohilani on Jun 16, 2008 8:13:19 GMT -5
Aww, thanks. <333
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Post by levy120 on Jun 16, 2008 11:50:51 GMT -5
Flawed Design... I miss that one... @@
Was one of my favourites too... care to remake that?
As for the fanfic...
I guess I should have waited until Saturday with the reading *cough*
Best line imho xD
And... I dunno when I read about DePalma I somehow have the feeling that he's an... intelligent (howishewritten) Varg... xD But that's just me ^^
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Post by Alohilani on Jun 16, 2008 12:17:32 GMT -5
"Flawed Design... I miss that one... @@ Was one of my favourites too... care to remake that?" ...This is the remake of it... o-o ...unless you mean the video? You probably do. I'm stupid. uhh... no, I probably won't remake that. I didn't care for it much myself. I'm glad you like the fic!  Thanks for the comment! |
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Post by Alohilani on Jun 22, 2008 14:20:35 GMT -5
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Post by Alohilani on Jun 28, 2008 16:34:49 GMT -5
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Post by BandGeek727 on Jul 2, 2008 13:06:03 GMT -5
Wow....
I really don't know what to say, except that - it's clear there's so much thought behind this. You're so good with wording, and everything just flows, it makes for a really enjoyable read.
Plus you've actually gotten me in suspense. I haven't anticipated the updating of a fic this much in quite a while. I really am looking forward to seeing where this is going.
Ooh, I also feel I should mention - I really like how subtly the Marred was worked in. Even the Beer. Niiiice. ^^
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Post by Alohilani on Jul 2, 2008 13:34:03 GMT -5
Aaah, thank you! <33333 I love that you like it.
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Post by Spirit-of-Twilight on Jul 2, 2008 16:39:58 GMT -5
This is very good! I admit I don't usually read fanfics (no time) but this one is definitely worth reading. Several places actually had me laughing out loud. And unlike many other fanfiction authors, you actually write the characters in character (which I know is something you strive for)
I'm very excited for the next chapter!
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Post by BandGeek727 on Jul 2, 2008 16:44:36 GMT -5
Aaah, thank you! <33333 I love that you like it. Awww! <333 That means a lot, to hear you say that. 83 You're so welcome! |
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Post by Alohilani on Jul 2, 2008 17:30:02 GMT -5
Aw, gosh! Thanks guys! <333
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Post by Alohilani on Jul 4, 2008 14:54:44 GMT -5
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Post by Alohilani on Jul 11, 2008 14:02:07 GMT -5
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Post by Spirit-of-Twilight on Jul 11, 2008 15:36:37 GMT -5
Awwwww...
That chapter really tugged at my heartstrings. So much emotion, and so well written!
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I think it's the best thing I've done in a while. Maybe ever.
I think it's the best thing I've done in a while. Maybe ever.
Thanks for the comment!
