Post by loony on Aug 18, 2008 22:43:37 GMT -5
Little oneshot I wrote. Kila was giving out sentence fragments to use as the beginning of a fanfic or whatever, and it looked like fun, so I decided to participate. I hope it's okay, because it turned into a pretty horrifying fic...
Acid pouring pouring acid from the sky painful searing splatter all over -can't hurt me.
Twitch, twitch.
Drip drop.
Everyone knows what happens when you leave something electrical outside in the rain, and this was to be expected. The end of an equation, the final answer, movie over, credits rolling across a silver screen, no hope of a sequel. Nothing. Just the searing acid rain that spattered against his metal coating, and the ever present reality that his ability to process thoughts was beginning to wane.
Tried to leave tried to get away away from everything from Star Command everythings gone now like winter snow with the coming of spring
Twitch, twitch.
You made your daddy mad made him mad mad mad don’t shut me down daddy I have a life of my own you have no say over what I do
Just because of the vampire? Because of him, he had to leave everything he had known? He had to move himself over to the far reaches of the galaxy, uncharted by Star Command, even now it was considered fairly remote. Even now…after so many centuries…pain still ran through his wiring. Because of what happened to him that made him leave…
You let her die die die let her die coughing blood up die in pain crimson liquid flowing from her wrists like cranberry juice
Writhe, twitch.
Drip drop.
He couldn’t save her, he never had a chance. It was like slow motion, really. He had seen her commit the act, razor blade in hand, but he had done nothing to stop her. Not until her pulse was gone, and the heat had long since left her. Why had HE taken her from him?
Dark master leave her alone she doesn’t want you to take her clothes off no don’t take my energy from me it’s mine get off get off get off get off get off get off its all black now Mira where are you
The vampire had taken her to his lair, and had tried to do things to her…he chased her down and failed. Weeks later, she came flying back to him in horrible condition, and one night, she had just snapped, calling him to her from the medical bay of Star Command
I can’t live like this XR I’ve gotta end it all god I hate myself I hate myself I hate myself
I didn’t kill her daddy you know I didn’t right Buzz
He had no place to go, as Star Command had kicked him out for murder. It was a suicide, why couldn’t anyone tell?
But that was so very very long ago now I’m the only one here no one to hear me scream no one who cares life has come and gone in this universe and all the robots are gone its only me only me only me
Drip drop.
Drip drop.
Twitch, twitch.
The rain was pounding on him harder now. He rolled over onto his back, and took off the metal coating that covered his chest.
Rain can’t hurt me rain can’t hurt me ha ha ha ha
He screamed in searing pain, but felt a sickly smile being spread across his face like unknown forces were doing it for him, oh the feeling of feeling his circuits blowing out.
Mira I’m coming for you
He ripped off the coating on his arms, seeing smoke coming from his gears and gyros. He stood up defiantly, circuits bare for all to see.
Rain can’t hurt me rain can’t hurt me
“ALRIGHT, UNIVERSE! GIVE ME YOUR BEST SHOT!”
A lighting bolt struck the malfunctioning robot, completely blowing him to bits. At last. After hundreds of years of pain and misery, he could finally be at peace. His charred remains fell into an orbit around the moon he had taken up residence on.
Twitch, twitch.
Drip drop.
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Like it? I think it's one of the darkest things I've ever written. What do you think? If the plot's a little hard to understand, sorry.
And if I get killed by XR fans for writing this, I completely understand.
Acid pouring pouring acid from the sky painful searing splatter all over -can't hurt me.
Twitch, twitch.
Drip drop.
Everyone knows what happens when you leave something electrical outside in the rain, and this was to be expected. The end of an equation, the final answer, movie over, credits rolling across a silver screen, no hope of a sequel. Nothing. Just the searing acid rain that spattered against his metal coating, and the ever present reality that his ability to process thoughts was beginning to wane.
Tried to leave tried to get away away from everything from Star Command everythings gone now like winter snow with the coming of spring
Twitch, twitch.
You made your daddy mad made him mad mad mad don’t shut me down daddy I have a life of my own you have no say over what I do
Just because of the vampire? Because of him, he had to leave everything he had known? He had to move himself over to the far reaches of the galaxy, uncharted by Star Command, even now it was considered fairly remote. Even now…after so many centuries…pain still ran through his wiring. Because of what happened to him that made him leave…
You let her die die die let her die coughing blood up die in pain crimson liquid flowing from her wrists like cranberry juice
Writhe, twitch.
Drip drop.
He couldn’t save her, he never had a chance. It was like slow motion, really. He had seen her commit the act, razor blade in hand, but he had done nothing to stop her. Not until her pulse was gone, and the heat had long since left her. Why had HE taken her from him?
Dark master leave her alone she doesn’t want you to take her clothes off no don’t take my energy from me it’s mine get off get off get off get off get off get off its all black now Mira where are you
The vampire had taken her to his lair, and had tried to do things to her…he chased her down and failed. Weeks later, she came flying back to him in horrible condition, and one night, she had just snapped, calling him to her from the medical bay of Star Command
I can’t live like this XR I’ve gotta end it all god I hate myself I hate myself I hate myself
I didn’t kill her daddy you know I didn’t right Buzz
He had no place to go, as Star Command had kicked him out for murder. It was a suicide, why couldn’t anyone tell?
But that was so very very long ago now I’m the only one here no one to hear me scream no one who cares life has come and gone in this universe and all the robots are gone its only me only me only me
Drip drop.
Drip drop.
Twitch, twitch.
The rain was pounding on him harder now. He rolled over onto his back, and took off the metal coating that covered his chest.
Rain can’t hurt me rain can’t hurt me ha ha ha ha
He screamed in searing pain, but felt a sickly smile being spread across his face like unknown forces were doing it for him, oh the feeling of feeling his circuits blowing out.
Mira I’m coming for you
He ripped off the coating on his arms, seeing smoke coming from his gears and gyros. He stood up defiantly, circuits bare for all to see.
Rain can’t hurt me rain can’t hurt me
“ALRIGHT, UNIVERSE! GIVE ME YOUR BEST SHOT!”
A lighting bolt struck the malfunctioning robot, completely blowing him to bits. At last. After hundreds of years of pain and misery, he could finally be at peace. His charred remains fell into an orbit around the moon he had taken up residence on.
Twitch, twitch.
Drip drop.
____________________________________________________
Like it? I think it's one of the darkest things I've ever written. What do you think? If the plot's a little hard to understand, sorry.
And if I get killed by XR fans for writing this, I completely understand.
