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Post by Skyfire on Mar 10, 2009 16:39:35 GMT -5
www.fanfiction.net/s/4695546/1/For_Good_I_WatermarkI took a break from the first fic ( Watermark) of my flagship series For Good to re-edit my REAL original novel, and though I haven't yet finished that project, I am also remastering Watermark. If there's anything you would like to see changed, added, etc., I'm open to suggestions! I've already taken a suggestion from Kila and my cousin is also helping me out... I'm pretty receptive right now! XD Let me know!
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Post by eez on Mar 11, 2009 14:01:47 GMT -5
Goooooooooooood luck!
Maybe add more paragraphs and details! But then again, that's just me....I like details. XD
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Post by saron on Mar 11, 2009 15:29:30 GMT -5
Best of wishes to ya Sky!
*I probably shoud redo mine too, but what I should and what I would are two different things entirely*
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Post by Warp Darkmatter on Mar 12, 2009 13:24:16 GMT -5
Sooooooo, does this mean you're back at FF.net?
You already know my opinion on the topic, but maybe you could be a little more in-depth about the life, people etc. at the Academy.
Just a suggestion.
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Post by Skyfire on Mar 12, 2009 13:35:30 GMT -5
Goooooooooooood luck! Maybe add more paragraphs and details! But then again, that's just me....I like details. XD DEFINITELY more paragraphs and details coming. ;D Yyeeessss... Been waiting for a certain little email to come... No, I'm not back on FF.net yet. I won't be until I can get (a) my real book done, and (b) the first few chapters... nah, forget that - most of the chapters of Watermark restructured. Anyway, the idea of going more in-depth with the Academy is good - something I hadn't thought about before... But that would also be going waaaay outside my knowledge zone. I don't really know what military or police schooling would be like - or at least, I know a little bit about military. Not police. =P But I'll keep it in mind, thanks!
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Post by Warp Darkmatter on Mar 12, 2009 20:06:36 GMT -5
Oh, okay.
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Post by Skyfire on Apr 15, 2009 11:00:38 GMT -5
Hmm... if I may ask, who gave me the vote on Booster? I sure never would've thought that I actually portrayed him better than anyone else... I hate to admit it, but he's barely in the fic at all!
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Post by Warp Darkmatter on Apr 15, 2009 22:30:25 GMT -5
Shoot, wasn't me!
I have to agree with eez on this, more details would be nice.
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Post by Skyfire on Apr 16, 2009 7:17:47 GMT -5
Well, I think that those details are definitely coming out more now. ;D
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Post by Warp Darkmatter on Apr 16, 2009 13:03:07 GMT -5
Oh, definitely. And we're patiently for another update.
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Post by Skyfire on Apr 16, 2009 15:37:17 GMT -5
Is that a hint? Sorry - the fanfilm's taking top priority right now. Maybe I'll have Ch 2 up next week - not making any promises, but maybe. ;D
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Post by Tonetone1224 on Apr 16, 2009 16:00:24 GMT -5
Speaking of the fanfilm, how far have you gotten on that anyway. I can't wait to see the whole thing. It must be fun
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Post by Skyfire on Apr 16, 2009 16:10:09 GMT -5
I've almost finished turning the part of the game that WILL be filmed into an actual fanfic. From there, I'll screenwrite the story, then storyboard it.
Craters.
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Post by Tonetone1224 on Apr 16, 2009 16:11:29 GMT -5
ooooh can't wait.
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Post by Skyfire on Apr 16, 2009 16:15:42 GMT -5
December's the set release month, though... Muwahahahaha!!! ;D
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