Post by Tonetone1224 on May 3, 2009 21:39:58 GMT -5
Chapter 10 “NOS-4-A2”
THRONE ROOM
Jana walked into Zurg throne room to find him sitting on his throne playing checkers with Warp. Once he saw that Jana had come in he looked up from his game.
“Ah good, your back. Did you finish the battery like I asked?” Zurg asked jumping over 3 of Warps pieces and kinging his
“Yup! It’s right here” Jana said throwing the battery to Zurg who caught it in his hand “Do you like it?”
“As a matter of fact I do. Very good work, Jana” Zurg said, smile on his face “My son should be arriving in a bit, would you mind going outside and waiting for him?”
“Sure. See you later” Jana left the room leaving Zurg and Warp to finish their game
“Zurg” Warp asked “You sure it’s a good idea to send Jana out to greet NOS.”
“Well of course, why wouldn’t it be?”
“Well Jana is part robotic, and NOS eats energy. He may attack Jana”
“I know”
“Then why did you send her out there?”
“Just wait, you will find out eventually”
“Okay them” Warp decided to just let it go. She can handle it…I hope
OUTSIDE ZURGS PALACE
Jana stood waiting for any sign of Zurgs son, but there was no one there. What was weird was that her scanner could not pick up anything; even though she kept on thinking she heard a sound
“Hello! Who’s there? Show yourself” Silence “Please
There was a sudden sound behind Jana, but when she turned around, no one was there
“If this is some kind of trick it’s NOT funny” Jana said, a hint of fear in her voice
Meanwhile, a few feet away from Jana, hovered a robot with two different sized eyes. He was watching and listening to the strange robot a few feet away from him. This robot was, NOS-4-A2 (incase you hadn’t noticed)
“Hmmm, lovely. A robot, I am quite hungry after my long travel here” the robot said to himself
He could hear the fear in its voice when it inquired who was there “Lovely”
Jana was starting to get impatient “I mean it! Don’t make me come and find you!”
NOS couldn’t take it any longer, he was VERY hungry
He came in for the attack “Here me, little one”
Jana whirled about to see the energy vampire in front of her, fangs showing
“Wh...who are you?” Jana choked out, why was she so scared of this, thing. Jana tried to hold herself together “I said, who are you?”
“I am NOS-4-A2! I am your doom” NOS lunged at Jana lifting her up into the air
“Hey get off of me you creep” Jana yelled trying to get out of the robots grasp, but to no avail.
It doesn’t seem to be so scared anymore, no bother I AM hungry NOS thought to himself before biting into her right side. He started to slowly drain Jana's energy. It was a new taste to him. It tasted sweet, with bit of tang to it. It was a lovely taste; it was like nothing he had ever tasted. Nos came back to attention after hearing the robots voice. It seemed to be holding back it's fear. But he saw right through hr falseness.
“Hey what are doing?” Jana yelled before feeling a sudden pain in her stomach. What’s happening
Jana couldn’t stand the pain any longer. She let out the scream she was trying so hard to hold back. Once he was sure it was completely drained, he dropped it to the ground and made his to Zurgs palace. Hope Zurg doesn’t mind that I ate one of his robots.
DUN DUN DUN I think this is my favorite chapter
What will happen to Jana? Will NOS get in trouble? Who won the checkers game? Why did Zurg send Jana out there? Will XR be ok with NOS there? Will I ever be quiet and continue my story? Find out next time on A New Commer *crowd applauds and screen slowly fades away before going blank*
THRONE ROOM
Jana walked into Zurg throne room to find him sitting on his throne playing checkers with Warp. Once he saw that Jana had come in he looked up from his game.
“Ah good, your back. Did you finish the battery like I asked?” Zurg asked jumping over 3 of Warps pieces and kinging his
“Yup! It’s right here” Jana said throwing the battery to Zurg who caught it in his hand “Do you like it?”
“As a matter of fact I do. Very good work, Jana” Zurg said, smile on his face “My son should be arriving in a bit, would you mind going outside and waiting for him?”
“Sure. See you later” Jana left the room leaving Zurg and Warp to finish their game
“Zurg” Warp asked “You sure it’s a good idea to send Jana out to greet NOS.”
“Well of course, why wouldn’t it be?”
“Well Jana is part robotic, and NOS eats energy. He may attack Jana”
“I know”
“Then why did you send her out there?”
“Just wait, you will find out eventually”
“Okay them” Warp decided to just let it go. She can handle it…I hope
OUTSIDE ZURGS PALACE
Jana stood waiting for any sign of Zurgs son, but there was no one there. What was weird was that her scanner could not pick up anything; even though she kept on thinking she heard a sound
“Hello! Who’s there? Show yourself” Silence “Please
There was a sudden sound behind Jana, but when she turned around, no one was there
“If this is some kind of trick it’s NOT funny” Jana said, a hint of fear in her voice
Meanwhile, a few feet away from Jana, hovered a robot with two different sized eyes. He was watching and listening to the strange robot a few feet away from him. This robot was, NOS-4-A2 (incase you hadn’t noticed)
“Hmmm, lovely. A robot, I am quite hungry after my long travel here” the robot said to himself
He could hear the fear in its voice when it inquired who was there “Lovely”
Jana was starting to get impatient “I mean it! Don’t make me come and find you!”
NOS couldn’t take it any longer, he was VERY hungry
He came in for the attack “Here me, little one”
Jana whirled about to see the energy vampire in front of her, fangs showing
“Wh...who are you?” Jana choked out, why was she so scared of this, thing. Jana tried to hold herself together “I said, who are you?”
“I am NOS-4-A2! I am your doom” NOS lunged at Jana lifting her up into the air
“Hey get off of me you creep” Jana yelled trying to get out of the robots grasp, but to no avail.
It doesn’t seem to be so scared anymore, no bother I AM hungry NOS thought to himself before biting into her right side. He started to slowly drain Jana's energy. It was a new taste to him. It tasted sweet, with bit of tang to it. It was a lovely taste; it was like nothing he had ever tasted. Nos came back to attention after hearing the robots voice. It seemed to be holding back it's fear. But he saw right through hr falseness.
“Hey what are doing?” Jana yelled before feeling a sudden pain in her stomach. What’s happening
Jana couldn’t stand the pain any longer. She let out the scream she was trying so hard to hold back. Once he was sure it was completely drained, he dropped it to the ground and made his to Zurgs palace. Hope Zurg doesn’t mind that I ate one of his robots.
DUN DUN DUN I think this is my favorite chapter
What will happen to Jana? Will NOS get in trouble? Who won the checkers game? Why did Zurg send Jana out there? Will XR be ok with NOS there? Will I ever be quiet and continue my story? Find out next time on A New Commer *crowd applauds and screen slowly fades away before going blank*