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Post by Tonetone1224 on Apr 26, 2009 16:44:57 GMT -5
Yay. I love it. You are good at writing this
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Post by xrsmechainic15 on Apr 27, 2009 14:16:15 GMT -5
thanks i usually have trouble writing fanfics, see i'm more of a cartoonist than writer.
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Post by Tonetone1224 on May 2, 2009 11:33:14 GMT -5
At least you are good at something, right? you could always try to make this into a comic and putting it on deviantART, if you have one
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Post by xrsmechainic15 on May 3, 2009 20:05:15 GMT -5
yeah i have one but it's mostly anime/manga stuff. I'm afraid it'll turn into that...
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Post by Tonetone1224 on May 3, 2009 20:08:51 GMT -5
ah. Theres nothing wrong with that, but I know how you feel
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Post by xrsmechainic15 on May 3, 2009 21:03:53 GMT -5
chap 8 -------------------------------------------- sam's pov I was running as fast as i could and that weird k-guy was right on my tail.If i can get to the tools in the control room i might be able to hold off this guy until someone comes to my recsue. I rounded a corner in the hall and kept going the guy rounded then said."screw this." he took out his gun and shot at me! Instead of hitting me though it hit the wall a few feet beside me and left this giant hole almost as big as xr!That made me run twice as fast!Then i finally saw it the control room door then
"Krash!" He came through the fricken wall!My mouth was agape. he was blocking my way, i couldn't get my tools.so i did what anyone would do i put up my fists and took a fighting stance like in my highschool days.
he grabbed my mechainical wrist."come along samantha and be a good girl."
I grabbed the arm he was holding me with. "whoever said i was a good girl?"and with all my strength i flipped him over my shoulder and on the ground."NOW STOP CALLING ME A GIRL JERK!"
"Sam!" xr rounded the corner and saw the guy."woah! remind me never to get you mad."I smirked.
"is everyone okay? is the battle over?"I brushed my hair outta my eyes.
"yeah warp's gone.."
"and so am i!"The guy i just flipped popped out a jetpack and blasted a hole in the wall."see ya later sweetheart!"and he flew out.
"HEY!"I yelled angirily.my fists were clenched.
"did he just call you?"xr said nervously.
"yeah." we looked out of the hole.
"well, guess you've gotta lot of work to do."he said cheerfully.I glared at him.then oh so gently wapped him on the dome with my mechainical hand. "OWWW!"he said rubbing his dome.
"you're lucky i don't have my wrench. ---------------------------------------------------- end chap8
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Post by Tonetone1224 on May 3, 2009 21:06:03 GMT -5
yay new chapters rock
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Post by xrsmechainic15 on May 4, 2009 15:35:08 GMT -5
i very much agree!
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Post by xrsmechainic15 on May 4, 2009 17:16:12 GMT -5
chap9 --------------------------------------------------- Sam pov
"buzz, if i'm gonna fix the ship, im gonna need supplies."i said leaning on his captain's chair.after the attack it left alot of damage.
"there's a planet nearby we can supplies at and next time you ask please use proper grammer sam."i guess everyone still a little ticked at me except xr. cause i kinda told well xr told everyone i'm a girl. Flashback ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ I was carrying some of my tools to the engine room when i accidently tripped over xr who appeared out of nowhere and i landed on him.again."you know I think you were created to torture me!"
"oh yeah?"
"Yeah!"he pushed me off of him. hearing the commotion everyone else came to thescene. "You know what i'm gonna do?"
"what?!"
"HEY EVERBODY! SAM"S A GIRL!"mira,buzz and boosters jaws dropped.I gasped.he didn't he couldn'tve but he did.I stood up.
"YOU KNOW WHAT EXPIRIMETAL RANGER! I WISH I NEVER MET YOU!"i stormed out.
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Post by Tonetone1224 on May 4, 2009 17:24:00 GMT -5
Oh noes. That was a good chapter. Short, but still good
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Post by xrsmechainic15 on May 4, 2009 17:46:38 GMT -5
sorry that's only part 1 cause my dad stole his computer back and i'm using my brothers.
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Post by Tonetone1224 on May 4, 2009 17:48:38 GMT -5
No need to apologize. I was just saying. How come sam did not want them to know she was a girl?
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Post by xrsmechainic15 on May 4, 2009 17:57:08 GMT -5
cause well she didn't want everyone to know cause she was afaid if they know they'll tell somebody and everyone will know and she was afraid kerri,alana and 42 would get hurt because of it.cause of her delinquent past alot of ppl r still out to get her.
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Post by xrsmechainic15 on May 4, 2009 17:57:35 GMT -5
ill post part 2 now.
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Post by Tonetone1224 on May 4, 2009 17:58:12 GMT -5
okay to both posts
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