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Post by xrsmechainic15 on May 4, 2009 20:02:13 GMT -5
chapter 9 part 2 sam's pov ----------------------------------- I was steaming mad. how could he? I trusted him! he was the only one who knew....on this ship. well i guess i did kind of start the fight. but he was in my way, and i always seem to be falling on top of him!(a/n sorry sam can't help it.lol.)well if he apologizes then maybe i'll talk to him."man, he's just sooo annoying!"i slammed my head on my desk.repeatedly.
"ummm sam... it's booster can i talk to you?" I walked to the door and opened it a little.
"yes? booster what is it?"
"ummm buzz told me to tell you that were landing soon and to get ready."he was being really shy and looking at his feet.
"hey boost,(my nickname for him)what would really help right now is just treat me like you treated me before when you thought i was a boy."i smiled.
he gave me a salute."yes sir! I mean ma'am i mean sam i oh man." I laughed.
"good luck with that."I smiled and closed and locked the door so noone could see me change clothes espicially robots... little later------------------- xr's pov "oh why did i tell everyone?!"i screamed at myself in my head.i started hitting myself in the dome.she must hate me.her words are still echoing in my head.i wish i never met you. oh that's just terrible.what am i thinking i was terrible! first i accidently let her trip over me.(not proud of that)then when i could tell she was just kidding i start a fight with her then tell everyone her secret.I'm such a jerk. i....i'm gonna go apologize. I started to walk to her room.but i stopped when i saw she was talking to booster. she was smiling and laughing with him.Didn't we just have a fight?he left and she closed her door.
we landed a little later and she finally came out.and she was wearing a sweater and a long skirt. "since ppl already know i'm a girl why hide it?"she shrugged.then looked at me for a second then looked away. "well i'll be back in a while. cya. booster i'll call you so you can carry heavy stuff."Here's my chance. "hey sam i'll go to!"she glared at me.
"fine." end chap 9 fianally!
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Post by Tonetone1224 on May 4, 2009 20:05:19 GMT -5
yay this chapter was goo too
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Post by Warp Darkmatter on May 5, 2009 15:37:05 GMT -5
I concur. The povs seemed a little short to me, but maybe that's just me.
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Post by xrsmechainic15 on May 5, 2009 18:10:05 GMT -5
chap10 ------------------------------------------ Xrs pov "why won't she look at me?" i asked myself in my head.i was walking along slide her in the marketplace on z9xx2.(A/n i can't really name any planets they don't show the show where i am anymore unfortunately.)
"hey."she said suddenly.she scared me!
"y-yeah?"
"you still owe me a wrench right?"she smiled.I looked at her.
i looked away."I don't know what your talking about." I'm only teasing her.
"oh come on! you remember! I hit you in the head with my favorite wrench!sure i kinda broke you but still!"this is a kinda funny argument but at least she's talking to me.
"I'll get you a wrench if you eat some lunch with me."
..."YOU DON'T EVEN EAT!"I snickered.
"maybe you could fix that."she looked away.
"no."i was surprised.
"huh? but why not?"
"You're perfect just the way you are."she said while looking away.she had a little blush on her face.
"Is that so?Is that a blush on your face?"i said sneering. she wapped me in the head with her mechanical hand.again. It knocked me to the ground.
"I've got no idea what you're talking about!"she turned around and started to walk away.
"h-hey wait up!"I got up and started to run after her. she was looking forward and trying(failing)to ignore me.
"so since we're alone and everyone knows you're a girl why don't we go out on a date?"she glared at me.I smiled cheesily at her.
"yeah,right."
"so is that a yes?"
"no."
"then is that a no?"
"no."she smiled and started to run.
"hey you've gotta give me an answer!"i started after her.
-------------------------------------------------------------- end chap 10 (dear lord 10 chapters already? I've got too much free time. please comment on dis chappie cause i know my last chapter was a little(lol) broken.
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Post by Tonetone1224 on May 5, 2009 18:13:38 GMT -5
Yay. I am also on chapter 10 of my fic too.
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Post by xrsmechainic15 on May 5, 2009 18:16:13 GMT -5
I'm sad i can't post thursday....stupid school band trip! i've got to be there at 5...In the morning! teh anger fuels me...
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Post by Tonetone1224 on May 5, 2009 18:47:45 GMT -5
hey I am going to a band trip later this year too. and i have to get there at the same time.
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Post by xrsmechainic15 on May 5, 2009 19:22:35 GMT -5
it sucks plus when ppl wake me up early i become the evil queen of darkness.
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Post by Tonetone1224 on May 5, 2009 19:24:11 GMT -5
Me too. Hey we are getting a little off topic
So anyway, can't wait until the next chapter
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Post by xrsmechainic15 on May 5, 2009 20:07:09 GMT -5
thanks i might put up a poll just cause i'm bored.
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Post by Tonetone1224 on May 5, 2009 20:17:07 GMT -5
ok
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Post by xrsmechainic15 on May 5, 2009 21:06:25 GMT -5
Chap 11 ------------------------------------- sams pov i was running ahead of xr after a very akward conversation. suddenly something grabbed my wrist and pulled me into an alley and pinned me against a brick wall."just because you've gone straight doesn't mean you can escape blue fire.(my name back in my gang.) I glared at this person.
"get your hands off her scumbag!"i glanced over to where the voice came from.It was xr and he had all his guns out.
"xr?"I was suprised.
"i'll give you to the count of 3."
the guy chuckled.
xr's lasers started to charge... "One....."
was he seriously doing this?!
"two....."
the guy suddenly let go of me and ran off.
"not bad x...."he suddenly changed his height and hugged me.
"are you alright?"I could feel my face heating up.I pushed him off.
"I..I'm f-fine..c-cmon l-lets g-get the ma-materials. he lookeed at me weirdly then smiled.
"sure."he started to walk alongside me until....
"SAMMY!" i know that voice anywhere.i turned around.
and i smiled and yelled."KERRI!" and ran forward to hug her. xr looked at me funny.
"xr this is my friend kerri.kerri xr."they shook hands.
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Post by xrsmechainic15 on May 6, 2009 15:35:26 GMT -5
chap12 ---------------------------------- sam's pov me and xr were sitting in an apartment.waiting for alana or kerri. "so these are those friends you wanted to avoid?"xr asked curiously.
"yeah.Kerri keeps going on how she saved me,but it's the other way around."
"how do you mean?"
"all i did was punch some guy in the face who was hitting on her and she made me eat dinner with her and her mother.back then i was the worst of the worst."he looked at me."my parents even hated me, but i never expected them to you know,disown me." he gasped."well enough of feeling bad lets get some snacks...
post part 2 later..
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Post by Warp Darkmatter on May 7, 2009 20:31:45 GMT -5
Much better. Good work.
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Post by xrsmechainic15 on May 9, 2009 12:27:11 GMT -5
Part2 sorry to keep u waiting! -------------------------------------------------------------- xr's pov so her parents abandoned her and she turned down a dark road. then how?how can she smile so happily like that? "um hey let me help you."i grabbed her hand causing her to drop the tray of drinks she was carrying and she slipped pulling me on top of her. "ah! sorry sam!"
"yeah yeah just get off you're heavy!"
"SAMMY! kerri told me you were home so i came....to...." a woman was standing in the doorway.she mentioned kerri so that means that person is kerri's mother the woman who took sam in from the very begininng.she stared at us. then she smiled.she quickly walked toward us and threw me into the wall behind us."ow."
"Oh poor sammy here all alone i wish i could've come sooner."
"i think i heard xr break his dome."sam said shakily.
the woman began to massage her shoulder ."oh my shoulder feels like i threw the biggest brute in the whole universe.i could use some lemonade right now."
i got up."right lemonade! sam where do you keep the lemonade in the fridge? where is it?" suddenly a foot slammed down on me!
"oh look a giant mechaical bug here for the squishing! and how can you talk so un-respectingly to my daughter?!"(she refers sam as to one of her own children.)
"ahhh!"now i know where sam gets it.
"oh mom please get off of sammy's friend he means no harm!" kerri came running in the door.
"oh really?"she said angerily.
"oh come on alana it was an accident." sam said coming to my rescue. "besides if you keep that up i'll have to fix him."
"gee,thanks sam."
"no problem xr." later.....................
"so sam you're in the rangers now huh? can you show us some of those cool fighting moves?"
"uh no unfortunately i'm just a mechainic."she laughed.
"oh congrats sammy! you've always wanted to be a mechainic." kerri,sam and alana looked so happy the three them.i guess i can see how sam got the way she is.
"hey xr what are you daydreaming about? we have to go."sam said getting up.
"oh do you have to?"kerri and alana said in unison.
"yeah we still have to pick up the materials. i'll call you guys later."we walked out the door.
alana's pov
"kerri,you and i both know it's not easy for sam to make friends.her past makes sure of that.but....if she can be with someone so easy.well then.." kerri looked at me.
"mom?"
"i'll bully him to death."
"seriously mom?" ------------------------------------------------ end chap 12
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