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Post by Tonetone1224 on May 9, 2009 12:39:25 GMT -5
good chapter, I like it
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Post by xrsmechainic15 on May 9, 2009 12:48:40 GMT -5
yah! i got a compliment!
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Post by xrsmechainic15 on May 9, 2009 13:46:20 GMT -5
my favorite part is when alana is squishing xr and she called him a bug.lol.now i know where sam gets it from
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Post by xrsmechainic15 on May 12, 2009 18:12:19 GMT -5
Chapter13(ahhhhhh! bad luck !) ----------------------------------------------------------------- Sam's pov xr and i were walking back to the ship.his arm's were filled up to my height.and I'm 2 or 3 feet taller than him."how are you holding up xr?"
"nnn."he grunted.I smiled and just skipping along to the ship.
"hey xr you acted kinda cool back in that alley.you had all your weapons out like waapaah!"and i made a small karate move.
"of course you were in trouble.i had to do something."he muffled under all the packages.
"really? why?" i said smirking.
"uhhhh....i.....Hey! look the ship!"he shouted suddenly and without warning.then he ran inside.i smiled and walked aboard.
pretty short but i've got a school band concert to get ready for and i'm tired of posting parts so the next one will be another chapter.
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Post by Tonetone1224 on May 12, 2009 18:25:10 GMT -5
cool. Thanx for posting this. I rocks
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Post by xrsmechainic15 on May 12, 2009 23:40:38 GMT -5
yah! i love compliments! *throws hands up in the air.*
xr:shut up and go to sleep!
me:i don't need slzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz!
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Post by xrsmechainic15 on May 18, 2009 19:35:38 GMT -5
chap 14 -------------------------------------- Flashback sam's pov i was fixing buzz's chair when.
"HARNING!"a voice yelled.
"YIEEEEE!"i said frightened and i turned around to see the commander on the mini-screen. "Yes commander sir!"i saluted.
"i've been recommended to give your crew a vaction." I gasped.
"Really?!" i said happily.
"yes just tell buzz to drop off the ship before the vacation starts.
"Yes sir!"i saluted and his image went off screen. end flashback
I was sitting in the hotel pool and lounging about. "Ahhh."i said happily.
mira swam over toward me."you made a great choice for a vacation. but your sitting like you would in a bath.
"what can i say i make good choices." I chose a small planet where it's super clean and has nice beaches.i got us to go to a hotel where you can gamble(for prizes),sun bathe(without sunburns),a pool for swimming and most important..... KAROKE! I stepped out of the pool grabbed a towel and headed toward the casino to see how are our little gambler was doing.(xr.)
Xr's pov i was rolling a pair of dice when she walked in.soaking wet, only wearing a towel. "xr are you almost done?we have to go to karoke tonight and i don't want you to be late. i started to drool.
"uh-huh."she grabbed my hand and started to pull me toward our rooms. then i noticed something. "are you blushing?" she quickly let go of my hand.
"I..I don't know what your talking about." her face was bright red. i smirked. "i gotta plan."i said in my head.
-------------------------------------- end chap 14
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Post by Tonetone1224 on May 18, 2009 19:46:05 GMT -5
Awesome chapter
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Post by xrsmechainic15 on May 18, 2009 19:48:53 GMT -5
thank you! i really really love karoke!
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Post by Tonetone1224 on May 18, 2009 19:49:30 GMT -5
Well I really like your story
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Post by xrsmechainic15 on May 18, 2009 19:50:51 GMT -5
oh! thank you!*hands you cookies*
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Post by Tonetone1224 on May 18, 2009 19:51:24 GMT -5
YAY COOKIES NOMNOMNOMNOM
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Post by xrsmechainic15 on May 18, 2009 20:07:41 GMT -5
u likes lolcats?
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Post by Tonetone1224 on May 18, 2009 20:12:18 GMT -5
depends on what lolcats are
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Post by xrsmechainic15 on May 18, 2009 20:16:33 GMT -5
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