saron
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Post by saron on Apr 7, 2009 20:57:22 GMT -5
Don't be embarrased or sorry. I just wanted to see if you or Erin would be willing to rework the ending a tad.
And no, by introducing a new character, I meant another rping person. XD But anyone can bring in an OC if they want--it doesn't matter much to me.
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Post by Warp Darkmatter on Apr 7, 2009 21:01:55 GMT -5
Sure, I think we can do that.
Oh. hehe.
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Post by Warp Darkmatter on Apr 7, 2009 21:05:49 GMT -5
better have Sky do it though. I'd screw the whole thing up.
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Post by Skyfire on Apr 8, 2009 5:48:07 GMT -5
better have Sky do it though. I'd screw the whole thing up. xDDD... Sry. Okay, Saron, what exactly did you have in mind? Zurg saying something more before leaving would be great. I'm sorry that we didn't allow for that last night and that the ending IS kinda rushed (something I didn't notice till now), but KJ and I were both here and it was like, "Wow, we might actually be able to finish this tonight!" Actually, I'd like to change the end a bit, too... No wedding-crashes, though!! Hmm, maybe Zurg could be glowering at the wedding on the ZV at home? Maybe blast it when they kiss? Or maybe I don't wanna spoil the wedding like that... Decisions, decisions. =P Well, I'm already in the process of reworking the story into novelization form, so I'll figure out what works. I'll send you a sample soon! So, Saron, who's the new player? Hey, could I add Zomega? Nah, just kidding! xDD And, KJ, I'd love to see Raey! (Would he have possibly been at the wedding? He could be added into the background.) And, Saron, I must direct your attention to this: xrfanclub.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=vid&action=display&thread=832&page=1MUY IMPORTANTE!!
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Post by Tonetone1224 on Apr 8, 2009 6:11:48 GMT -5
Wow. I finally had time to finish it. I love it so much and the filming project is such a cool idea
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Post by Skyfire on Apr 8, 2009 7:14:52 GMT -5
Finish what? O.o
Glad you like the filming idea! ;D
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Post by Skyfire on Apr 8, 2009 7:18:28 GMT -5
Oh, you mean you finished reading the story? Glad you love it so much!
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Post by Warp Darkmatter on Apr 8, 2009 7:35:00 GMT -5
Yay! Someone besides us likes our work. *is happy*
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Post by Skyfire on Apr 8, 2009 14:14:19 GMT -5
If Zurg hadn't been such a hardcore badguy in the story, I'd be tempted to insert him into the wedding as one of the guests and bawling with Booster... ;D
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Post by Warp Darkmatter on Apr 8, 2009 14:32:54 GMT -5
That would have been great.
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Post by Skyfire on Apr 8, 2009 14:35:49 GMT -5
Hmm, maybe if he was sugar-hyper again...
Yeah, that COULD work...
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Post by saron on Apr 8, 2009 15:00:03 GMT -5
I don't think you could add Zurg in the wedding, and definitely NOT due to hyper sugar. I mean, that would be a letdown after Zurg's "hardcoreness," instead of just being some goofball like many believe him to be. There's a deeper side, you know? I really enjoyed the RP, but the end seemed a bit rushed and lacking substance, as opposed to the earlier parts.
Shoot the computer panel, not the messenger.
Just an opinion.
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Post by Skyfire on Apr 8, 2009 15:01:32 GMT -5
*taps fingers on keyboard* Fine, you have a problem with it? What DO you want to do then?
Sorry, Saron, but I'm giving suggestions here and you're not taking them. WHAT DO YOU WANT??
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Post by saron on Apr 8, 2009 15:12:19 GMT -5
XDDDDD what do I want? I kind of wanter Zurg leaving and having a talk with the real Shiv Katall, who turns out to know Warp from the past, and have another fan join the rp for some added action.
That or Zurg jetting away, thinking about what was in the original package Warp secured for him, that we seemed to have forgotten about during the course of the action.
And if there was a wedding, could we add a chaotic wedding planning session beforehand? This way, it gives you a lot more time before HONEYMOON
And I thought this RP was rather short. We could have easily extended it to 3 digits, or at least 2 digit pages
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Post by Skyfire on Apr 8, 2009 15:16:41 GMT -5
okay, i could work with that! how bout you, KJ? and, Saron, have you seen the thread on the filmmaking project?
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